The Most Beautiful Poem in the World

poem about a magical love

From the purest form of the chemical concoction that make up

my emotions

Stems a love that is bigger and stronger and deeper than oceans.

It can’t be resembled by spells made with potion.

These heaven sent love poems are my daily devotion.

Through prosperity and poverty

Through sickness and health

This love is my novelty

And my greatest wealth.

If I could give you my heart in a giftwrap I’d do it.

If I could cry you a river to pay back I’d do it.

I could write you a poem every day for a year.

A poem for every day you shed a tear.

I’d write you the most beautiful poem in the world

Cuz you deserve that and much more from your girl!

Author's Note

Reviews are encouraged and welcomed!

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Kimberly,
I am truly touched by the tenderness, the genuine, gentle warmth and affection living in and soaring out from your lovely core onto the page … you are more than just a little special, and the person whom you created this virtual gem for must know they are the luckiest alive to receive the most beautiful poem in the world … and you certainly made me believe it! : )

On the techy side, it has a beautiful cadence and easy flow, excellent choices of wording to speak in the poetic voice I can feel you intended, Dear Poetess; yet, it lacks in proper grammar and poetic structure that would make it the virtual masterpiece presentation it deserves, and I believe you would wish it to be. Please, allow me to illustrate a "for instance" for you, using the first eight lines:

From the purest form of chemical concoction
that composes my endless emotions,
Stems a love that is bigger, stronger,
and deeper than oceans;
and, it can’t be resembled
by spells made with potions.
These heaven sent love poems
are my daily devotions.

Through prosperity and poverty,
through sickness and health …
this love is my novelty
and my greatest wealth.

I cannot thank you enough for the honor and enjoyment of sharing with you your wonderful poetry … big hugs to you! ⁓ Richard

[Kimberly Navarro]

wow, incredible! thank you EVER so much!!! this comment is greatly appreciated. I have written a book a poetry which is currently waiting approval before distribution. I wish you have been my editor. This is the kind of constructive criticism that I lack. thank you fora very valuable review.

[Richard🖌]

Kimberly,
With the practiced-eye of a long-tenured teacher of poetry, I see a fine potential in your skills, and you've something very special within you passionately want to be expressed in a most effective, true, and honest ways, that cannot be taught, that deserves to be developed in a very eloquent and proper way … I think you could be a master poetess.

[Kimberly Navarro]

Richard, you hit it right on the head about me. I really wish you would read my book. I know that editing it is way too much to ask, but it would be a true honor to have you read it. I would send you the book for free because I feel you can really captured the essence of me and what you have expressed is exactly what I want my audience to get from me through my book of poetry. The book is called The Heart of a Young Woman. It is currently waiting to be proofed to be distributed. I think its done, but if I could be blessed to have you look at it, that would be sooo perfect. How can we connect on a individual level?

[BlackPrince]

this is amazing.
I love the delivery and flow, so full of love and truth.

[theta sigma]

Nice in all respects, very good

[Kimberly Navarro]

thank you very much for your comment theta

[aruntp Thalassery]

written with good imagination. nice work.

[Kimberly Navarro]

i appreciate that aruntp

[B. Boileau]

The love of writing from a poet. Screams volumes of your devotion. Well done

[Kimberly Navarro]

nice, thanks