A CYCLIC BORE

A CYCLIC BORE

A Poem by kingblaq
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Read in descending order, then in ascending order

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I am broken
I got cheated by my weakness's poison
that died in a free fall
Like a porcelain doll

Psych!

I am way more
Think about a looping time
A cyclic bore
I am unbroken

© 2021 kingblaq


Author's Note

kingblaq
I don't get to write as often as I used anymore, so I challenged myself to write a poem that still made sense when read from the ground up.
This is one of two poems I have written this way so far...

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Hey, I REALLY liked this! It's playful in construction and meaningful in content. Excellent work king.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Nice dance of words. I wanted to know and read more my friend. You made the reader need to know more and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


The descending version was much more reassuring than the ascending.

Posted 6 Months Ago



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Added on May 14, 2021
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kingblaq
kingblaq

Ibadan, Nigeria, Oyo State, Nigeria



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