The Big Hard One!

The Big Hard One!

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
"

Things we can't say with ease!

"

Those damn words,

Why doesn't our mouth spit it out,

I love you!

 

© 2013 Thomas Fitzgerald


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Thomas Fitzgerald
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I know how others can have such a hard time admitting their feelings to others. Often it is the fear we feel that holds us back. Though I have felt such fear in admitting feelings, when it came right down to it and I was with the woman who has held my heart for 6 years, nothing held me back from saying those three little words.

Now, I tell her every day that, indeed, I do love her.

Well written and important.

-Caradoc

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you my darling x



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Love the double entendre on this. And yes, that is very good question.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you x
Rejection I guess...or just afraid they will think they have power over you after you say
those three words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you x
Hahaha. A lot of wit and charm even in your poetry...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sami
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Short and simple. I love it, Sometimes we all wonder why three words are so hard to say. Very well penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you x

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Added on July 4, 2013
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Tags: Love, Senryu, Poetry, People

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Thomas Fitzgerald
Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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To all who know by now - I love you. For those that don't, I review a lot of work on here, and I expect the same in return, friend me but make sure to have conviction! I'm a horror writer mostly bu.. more..

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