You

its short but i like it :)

Listen to me now

as I speak these words

into the bottomless, black, obis

that is your heart.

YOU,

someone that I trusted,

YOU,

someone I believed in

tried to cut me down to nothing.

YOU

tried to break my bones

and cut my strings.

But I am here to tell you now...

YOU

Failed. 

Reviews

[TheSweet]

It is short, but it is empowering. Always prefer a character with the ability to be independant or strong enough not to cry over a footstep in the wrong direction. :) Thanks. :)

[Michael Thrower]

Hmmmmmmm

[lalala]

Tht could be part of a song... somehow. lol great write

[victoria]

reeks of survival...well done.

[Meghan]

Very nice poem about the perseverance and strength of a person. I can appreciate the message of this poem. It's important to stay strong when others are cutting us down. Great write!

[Luciole]

this is short but it's amazing!! loved it

[TheReal]

This was good. I liked it. Short, sweet, to the point.

[$êlvån]

Such a strong piece...gr8 one...believe me i loved this poem from first word till the last..keep it up.:)..ending ws simply gr8...hats off:)

[Emerald Seas]

A short write and to the point. A good lesson in this poem. Don't ever let someone make you feel less than who you truly are, and reduce you to thinking you cannot be all that you strive to be. Life can be difficult and you're going to run into people and situations that test your resolve, staying positive and true to who you are will get you through a great deal of pain. It'll hurt for a while, but don't ever be less than you for anyone... even if they don't like it. Great write with a message.