Candles

Candles

A Poem by Poetry Girl
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I was sitting on the counter starring at a candle and decided that I liked them so I wrote this haha xD

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The sweet, sweet smell of candles.
The smell of the flames as they burn.
The kind, hard smell of candles.
I don't ever stop to learn.
I don't question how or why it does it.
I don't question why the smell is pure.
I don't wonder how the flame is lit.
I don't wonder why it's such a lure.
I love the smell of candles.
That's all I really know.
The thought to stop and smell the roses
Along the side of the road.

© 2010 Poetry Girl


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This is just wonderful! I can't even...
you're a wonderful writer!

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I love scented candles. I can remember walking through the mall and smelling them in a store and wanting to walk in. I suppose that was the idea. Ha It's one of lifes little pleasures as is stopping to smell the roses. Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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nice..i like how you equate the thought of stopping to smell the roses with candles

Posted 13 Years Ago


The thought to stop and smell the roses
Along the side of the road.

Love the ending part. This is amazing and a enjoy to read.

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