Go Ahead

Tired of boys being disrespectful towards me and a lot of other girls

touch me, do it

insult me, do it

disprespect me one more time

go ahead

im going to go off on you

like a ticking bomb

im waiting

 

Rap your arm around my waist

go ahead

watch me rip it right off

 

text me one more time

say you wana see a picture

go ahead

the only thing you'll see for the next week

is the imprint of my fist on your face

 

hit my butt one more time

go ahead

my foot will do the same to yours

 

touch me, do it

insult me, do it

disrespect me one more time

go ahead

im going to go off on you

like a ticking bomb

im waiting

 

im sitting here

go ahead

make me mad

 

be a real man

dont be a stupid little boy

back off while you've got the chance

this is a warning

 

touch me, do it

insult me, do it

disrespect me one more time

go ahead

im going to go off on you

like a ticking bomb

im waiting

Author's Note

i was pretty angry when i wrote this and was just trying to release it as best as i could so i know this isnt very good... like at all. but its still a poem that i wrote so im posting it anyway.

Reviews

[Tim]

That's telling them Po! Ha I wouldn't want to run into you in a dark ally. LOL Strong emotions in this one. Good job.

[kuru]

this has a decent flow...its almost like a song

[Jonathan De Elvira]

are you kidding me? This is okay...
The flow is intense and strong...
wonderful write...
I can feel how angry you are in this one...
and you didn't even use the exclamation point...