My Love Song To No One

My Love Song To No One

A Poem by rickROSS
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Finally, my first lyrics in a long time. Hope you like it.

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Sit down, this won't take long.

I'm just trying to write the perfect love song.

This is for no one to disagree upon.

That's why I'll write this song.

 

As the sun sets on the coast, between the ocean blue.

I wanna be here with you.

I wanna kiss your hand and hold you tight.

I wanna be here all night

I never want this to end, I never want this to end

 

This is my love song, and I'm writing it for you

We'll spend the whole night on West Coast Avenue

This'll be the best night 'cause I'm spending it with you

So take my hand and we'll run across the ocean blue, tonight

 

As the sun begins to rise, among the horizon.

Will you be here 'til days end?

Play the mixed tape that I had brought for you

It explains my love for you.

I never want this to end, Only if it hadn't begun.

 

As the sun sets on the coast, between the ocean blue.

I wanna be here with you.

I wanna kiss your hand and hold you tight.

I wanna be here all night

I never want this to end, I never want this to end

 

Sit down, this won't take long.

I'm just trying to write the perfect love song.

This is for no one to disagree upon.

That's why I'll write this song.

 

As the sun sets on the coast, between the ocean blue.

I wanna be here with you.

I wanna kiss your hand and hold you tight.

I wanna be here all night

I never want this to end, I never want this to end

 

Sit down, this won't take long.

© 2008 rickROSS


Author's Note

rickROSS
I hope you liked it, tell me if you did or didn't(be honest). and tell em what could be fixed up or not. Thanks.

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...I almost didn't read this because of the title. In general I hate love songs/stories... but this one was nice. What will either make or break it is going to be the music, but these are some pretty tight lyrics. If you ever get the music written and recorded, send me the file. I'd really like to hear it all finished. Kudos. :)

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Would have to hear it to music. Can't really decide if I like it or not. Like the concept of it though.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

...I almost didn't read this because of the title. In general I hate love songs/stories... but this one was nice. What will either make or break it is going to be the music, but these are some pretty tight lyrics. If you ever get the music written and recorded, send me the file. I'd really like to hear it all finished. Kudos. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 14, 2008

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Chelsea, MA



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I'm Ross... I like to write screenplays, short stories, and songs. Yes, I'm a song writer. I like to skateboard... and yeah. I'm fourteen years old. I just love to write. I have written over 100 hundr.. more..

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