Yes Or No?

Yes Or No?

A Poem by lakki

I'm chained with every memory I have with you
It is no more you closiness or your distance that comfort
You are nice to everyone, including me
No more able to distinguish.:are you in love with me or it is your way of being polite
Hardly I know what to say when facing you
Silence comes my weapon when I'm talking to you
Boring would be me when sitting. Next to you
I'm tired of reading the signs you're sending

I'M IN NEED OF HEARING IT FROM YOU
A YES OR NO TO END MY AGONY

© 2014 lakki


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Everyone has been through such feelings at some point or another.

Is "closiness" supposed to be "closeness"? (Line 2).

Posted 6 Years Ago


lakki

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review. Yes, it is.
Those questions we need answers to. Sometime we must ask them to know where we stand. I like the feel of need to know where you stand with the person. A very good closure to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


lakki

9 Years Ago

Thank you ;)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
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ron
You have a definite way have writing. You write with passion with few words but convey so much.

Posted 9 Years Ago


lakki

9 Years Ago

Exactly...I'll try to come up with something long these days ;)
ron

9 Years Ago

Let the long ones come when they come. They will.
lakki

9 Years Ago

Ok. I will.

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Added on July 5, 2014
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