The last leaf

It was his last leaf and it falled yesterday
Deeds written on its sides
Roots standing for another life
An unusual heritage he left behind
"Crys, longings, and a staunch wife!"
That frozen figure of yours never brings you back
But a prove of you pumping air
How long would your name be said?
To what island has he sailed ?
Your too lucky more than you had guessed
That young girl you had protected once
Has grown up to dedicate
A profound piece of her heart.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

An interesting poem. I like it.

I made some minor copy edits for you:

It was his last leaf and it [fell] yesterday
Deeds written on its sides
Roots standing for another life
An unusual heritage he left behind
"Crys, longings, and a staunch wife!"
That frozen figure of yours never brings you back
But a [proof] of you pumping air
How long would your name be said?
To what island has he sailed?
Your too lucky, more than you had guessed
That young girl you had protected once
Has grown up to dedicate
A profound piece of her heart

[lakki]

Thank you so much :)

[MomzillaNC]

You're very welcome.

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Really cool piece. A few grammatical error as MomzillaNC so nicefully pointed out. But overall, I find it very captivating. Especially the first half. Keep up the good work.