Sister

Sister

A Poem by Lilaa

Dear my darling sister,
you emerged from your 
seat, excitement gushing 
out of your soul like a 
volcano finally erupting 
after years of storing 
fluid in it's own body,
your light hazel eyes 
dynamic, illuminating 
like a set of Christmas 
lights, you cannot seem
to control your excitement

My dear sister, life is full
of unbelievable excitement,
life has the tendency to lift
your spirit as high as the neighbors
next door, it has the nerve to
make you feel on top of the world 
only for it to remove the ladder,
leaving you stumbling over like 
a wreckage, having you question 
the reason why you hit the ground 
so hard without some sort of warning

Sister I tell you this, do not mistake 
ones love for eternity, do not grab
a hold of something that is willing 
to let go, leaving you empty handed 
and with a discharged heart,
leave room for yourself, only love 
if they show it first and only love
those who love you harder 

My darling little sister, do not 
mistake ones love for hands,
do not mistake lips for the truth,
do not relish in ones love, because
it will become of you, it will
soak up your essence, spit out 
your independence and turn you 
into saw dust gasping for air, air
you already have for yourself 

Sister, your love is incredible although,
not everyone is deserving of it, love
is painfully addicting do not become 
the victim of ones satisfaction, become
the receiver of ones undying love

© 2016 Lilaa


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You have pointed out some lovely things through out the poem and i loved the way you have used some amazing words....It seems to me that you are telling your sister to be aware of both the beauty and the dark truths of this world....Very unique work my frnd....Full ratings.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very creative and like the unusual words that you used.

It made me want to read more.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lilaa

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I am known for my unusual words haha! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
solemn warning and so true. Great poem. thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lilaa

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the feedback, glad you liked it :)

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Lilaa
Lilaa

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