Exo-Genesis, The Beginning Part 1

You have no idea how this is going to end... And I hope you people don't get mad at me... Enterlude, Part 1

I was walking

I am walking

I'm going to walk

Don't know where I'm going

Don't know why I feel sad

It's just something that happens

Something in my mind

Neurons and Neurons

Transfering memories to each other

Telling stories of these guy

Who felt sad

Bringing back memories

From the past

Making himself feel sad

What to do?

The young man said

After hours of searching

I found a treasure

I website where I could post my writing

Finally, Somewhere were to share my thoughts

After this oddisey

I'm finally here

I entered

A castle

Where I could see writing from everyone

From Cool Girl to ANTO

From DoormanDan ( Or Dan) To iveltac

From my Friend Frankie to Ana Sophia

And so the list kept going

Afraa's writing

Kyline's writing

Jacob's writing

To my friend the Resilient 

and many more

But I'm not going to write a full list

Don't get me wrong

You all are great writers just by being here

and sharing your emotions and thoughts

I started with my writing

Then my first poem

And so the story went

On

Forward

Now

The neurons in my head 

Had another story to tell

"We finally found a place

To share our stories and poems"

"The storm cease, so lets better

make happiness a royal highway

Or else is going to go again...''

Reviews

[Emily]

I love the meaning of the poem!
Well done!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Poetry helps in "Purging"... the word which ANTO taught me... yes there are brilliant writers here... reading them helps in relaxing the mind and its a great learning experience too..... very well written poem this one....

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Anurag, I'm glad you liked this one
And yeah this place is really good!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

it a nice poem.... and the way u used your words are beautiful :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Daisy]

great choice of words ....... yes u r right let ur storm spred on papar and share us....... great poem by the way

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Daisy, I'm glad you liked it

[jonah]

Hmmm it still hasn't taken a shape. but since this is the first part I believe it will be more clearer in the end. looking forward for the next part, Lizardo! anyway, what does exo-genesis mean? all I know is that it's also one of Muse's songs with the same title :))

[Lizardo]

Thank God somebody that hears Muse!!!! :DDDD xD
Sorry hear xD
I took the idea from the song
Its kind of like going to a new beginning

[jonah]

great band, amazing music xD not a big fan of them though, but their music tastes grand and apocalyptic. keep it up! I really wanna see how this would end :D

[Lizardo]

Already put up the three parts if you want to see them :)

[Cool Girl]

That was interesting and unique and cool and awesome and......
Hahaha xD
Great job:)

[Lizardo]

I Just hope I don't make anyone mad xD it has three parts
I'm going to write the second one right now
Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome..