He'll Never Love Me

Love hurts.

I can cry and he won't care

I'm trying to tell myself,

He won't be there.

He looks at everyone

But doesn't see me

I guess, I know, its not meant to be

He'll never love me

He'll never try

To be my one and only guy

I'm turning around

I'm walking away,

But with him, my heart

Has chosen to stay.

And I can't blame him

For the tears that I've cried

All the times he hurt me,

All the times he lied.

Its all my fault, don't you see?

For who would ever be in love with me? 

Reviews

[ATG]

This was a very interesting poem. It was well written and got your emotions out perfectly. I enjoyed reading it even though it was a little sad. I am sure you will find someone who will love you.

[Mitji]

Ya...ummm....wow! I know how you feel! I love this poem it really relates to me and i really enjoyed it!

[Grace]

Wow I can see someone doing that to me to this one is so good I keep reading it over and over again

[KieraCrimeScene]

We can all relate to this. Unfortuanetly. Powerfull, good flow. Thanks for sharing

[Meradee]

I know exactly how you feel. This poem conjured up the feelings I've been trying to deny for the past...I don't know, four months. You can portray emotion very well. You got your point across and I knew what you wanted me to hear, to feel. Wonderful write. It's going in my favorites.
Pepper...

[Eagle Cruagh]

The good that you saw in him justifies his
existance, otherwise why waste your breath.

Your story has been told and retold, however
the writing of your emotion and the expression
of your feeling is not easily done, only you saw the
depths and nuances that existed.

A sad tale told with sincerety, diplomacy and depth.

Excellent writing !

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Brandon]

Wow, This is really good. Great Job.

[Arthur Crow]

This guy doesn't see very well, if it were me, the only person I would ever see is you.. In the end, you deserve better!
So deeply expressed.. really feeling your words.

[Cherryblossom]

Don't say that, you have to keep tell yourself that yeah, he wasn't the right guy but that doesn't mean you won't find one in the future. There are plenty of fish in the see, so go try as many as you'd like. Great write by the way. :)