You and I

You and I

A Poem by Louisa Chan

Your heart overlaying mine

Galloping towards that bright source of light

Till we reach the shore on the other side

You and I shall then dissipate in a blast

Not a dust shall stay or last

Not you or I

© 2023 Louisa Chan


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BEAUTIFUL, JUST BEAUTIFUL

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Louisa Chan

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review!
Best wishes,
Louisa
A thought provoking piece of brevity Louisa.

Your heart overlaying mine

A picture of lifetime togetherness extending into eternity. Beautifully conveyed love story. Hope you are well and happy.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Louisa Chan

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Chris!
Yes, holding my dear till death separates us.....
Hope you ar.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

All good here thank you Louisa 💐

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 Added on February 4, 2023
Last Updated on February 4, 2023
Tags: You and I, romance, death, love

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Louisa Chan
Louisa Chan

Hong Kong, - None -, Hong Kong



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I like music and literary writing. I like to write about "forms of existence" that often elude our attention, especially the weak and the underprivileged. I like to write songs and lyrics too. Tha.. more..

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