Too much on your head ?

Too much on your head ?

A Poem by brenda

Don’t look for things and expect to find them

So don’t  strain yourself trying to write something

Don’t do that cause inspiration hits you

You write very good

So let inspiration come to you

And stop worrying if it will come or not

© 2011 brenda


Author's Note

brenda
for lizzy !:)

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Love it! Somebody who agrees with me in every way!
I never write for writings sake, that just produces terrible words.
You must write because you are inspired! =D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

e.e. cummings jr. you are so right. If it doesn't come out easily then leave it alone. Come back to it. Let it come by itself. Love you Brenda!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good message, an 'inspired' write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I dig the message. The only thing i had a problem with was the first line, "expect them to find them". ? Simple and to the point.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good advice. Need to relax and allow the mind to create. Best way to re-birth energy. Read some good poetry. I like the positive feel of this poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks girlie! :)

~Lizzy~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 1, 2011
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brenda

boredom city:p!!!, FL



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