the beauty of breath

the beauty of breath

A Poem by luviva
"

u knw.. life n all

"

the beauty of breath

the unreachable and

hard to contemplate kind

of beauty.

 

have you ever thought

about it?

i mean really hard

what a single breath can do.

 

during those anxiety moments

just a deep breath is what it

takes,

to calm the raging sea.

 

when that fierce volcano

of rage is boiling close to

spilling point...

a deep breath keeps it in.

 

when there is a civil war

between your heart and mind..

a breath of pure fresh air in a calmenvironment

is the best weapon to conquer it.

 

God gave us breath...

to stop any anticipated problems.

how great is that??

© 2014 luviva


Author's Note

luviva
well just woke up breathing and thought really hard about it and what i descovered is what is penned above.
read and review please??

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I appreciated the choice of words and the content. Natural endowment can nullify the problems of mind or such eruption that come from volcano. You gave 'Breath' the power of heaven that it's inevitable to living and non living. Well written. I so much enjoyed this. Hope you'll write another.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I appreciated the choice of words and the content. Natural endowment can nullify the problems of mind or such eruption that come from volcano. You gave 'Breath' the power of heaven that it's inevitable to living and non living. Well written. I so much enjoyed this. Hope you'll write another.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes yes yes...and when there is no breath, life ceases

Posted 7 Years Ago


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luviva

7 Years Ago

so cassie..
thanxx for the review.
A very nice poem, i like it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not sure one breath is going to stop the war, perhaps count to ten whilst breathing....but I get the concept, we should be grateful for each breath we inhale. Good to see you back luviva!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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luviva

7 Years Ago

Thanxx P gotta dash.. am drowning in an avalanche of papers...
see you soon if I survive!!
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Ha well try your damnedest...see you soon.
luviva

7 Years Ago

Damnedest?? Loving that! M back
When God breathed life into Adam, He must have had this logic firmly in His mind. You said it all. Very well conveyed Luviva.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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luviva

7 Years Ago

thanxx Divya.
very much appreciate the time and review XXX

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