My First Love

My First Love

A Poem by Mary Jo. Clare

This poem is an ode to my first love. We were young, but we still cared for each other. Please allow yourself to relate to this poem. Enjoy!

We were juvenile 

Simply kids, yet lovers at heart 

Unable to be together, yet too strong a force to pulled apart 

I felt your calming touch in my dreams 

That had the ability to suppress my tireless nightmares 

The thought of you made my dark cheeks blush, and my dull skin tingle

The sound of your laugh resembled the melodic tune of angels harmonizing

With each glance, your eyes drew me closer each time I told myself I'd turn away

You were irresistible 

A shining light on a rainy day
My first love

© 2018 Mary Jo. Clare

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Mary Jo. Clare
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Been there: That over whelming desire but to shy to say + Dream of them __ BUT ----- alas just a distant dream

Posted 5 Years Ago

This reads like a raw and pure love story. It shows how you had a kind heart and a soft corner for that person.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Mary Jo. Clare

5 Years Ago

Amazing insight, thank you Najam!
Najam Us Saher

5 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Tender and gentle, filled with fond remembrance. Just like first love should be.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Mary Jo. Clare

5 Years Ago

Very well said! Thank you!

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Added on November 5, 2018
Last Updated on November 5, 2018
Tags: love, young, juvenile, irresistible, presence, force, strong


Mary Jo. Clare
Mary Jo. Clare

Washington D.C, DC

I am someone who has turned to writing in the past years in order to express my real-life experiences and feelings. Please allow yourself to relate to my works! Leave comments, suggestions and .. more..


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