Evil Gummibears

Evil Gummibears

A Story by Mazie Tackett

Human were becoming endangered. Evil gummibears were taking their revenge out on the human race for eating their children. Lyla and Brooke were on a mission to save the world from the dreaded gummibear army. Growing up in a deserted town, after their father died, they had tp take care of themselves. As adults, they were tough and able to make quick decisions. They decided to hunt down the gummibears. Soon they found they castle, and inside they captured the evil gummibear king. Knowing they would die if their connection with their king was broke, every gummibear rushed to the kings rescue. Prepared Lyla and Brooke had set up a trap to capture them all. They set up a chest and tied the king up inside. The gummibears all rushed inside to get him. When the last one was in Lyla and Brooke closed the door. They turned the key in the lock and walked away forever.

© 2012 Mazie Tackett

Author's Note

Mazie Tackett
My friend Valerie helped me with this. I thought I'd post this just for kicks. Its amusing to me

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Mmmm gummibears! Cute story :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Gummibears...I love gummibears :D I like the short story; thanks for sharing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

A great beginning sketch for a kick a*s short story, somewhat like Small Soldiers. Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Not sure if its supposed to be gummibears (if it is than it should be Gummibears) but usually its spelled gummy bears.

Growing up in a deserted town, after their father died, they had tp take care of themselves.----whose tp? If its a name it should be TP.

cute story

Posted 11 Years Ago

"tp"? Do you mean "to take care"? "King's rescue" needs an apostrophe; it's possessive. "Prepared, Lyla and..." needs a comma. "When the last one was in, Lyla" needs a comma. It's a very cute story. I had a chuckle.

Posted 11 Years Ago

this is so creative

Posted 11 Years Ago

Well here's that thing. Gummy bears are actually from outer space. They came to brainwash us with their deliciousness just for this reason. One day this will happen. It's Great that someone other than me saw this coming. Nice work. It's funny. And I'm curious (good old me) about what happened after that's all over... hmm

Posted 11 Years Ago

Haha cute and funny. And another funny thing is that when I was done reading this, i scrolled down to post a comment. And guess what I saw? A HUGE gummyworm being eaten by a dude on an ad! Weird right? Well anyways, Great story! Funny, too! You've got a wonderful imagination, my friend. Oh and your friend Valerie, too! Again, nicely done. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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18 Reviews
Added on June 4, 2012
Last Updated on June 4, 2012
Tags: gummibears, endangered, lock, key, king, funny, amusing, laughs, short, story


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