Evil Gummibears

Human were becoming endangered. Evil gummibears were taking their revenge out on the human race for eating their children. Lyla and Brooke were on a mission to save the world from the dreaded gummibear army. Growing up in a deserted town, after their father died, they had tp take care of themselves. As adults, they were tough and able to make quick decisions. They decided to hunt down the gummibears. Soon they found they castle, and inside they captured the evil gummibear king. Knowing they would die if their connection with their king was broke, every gummibear rushed to the kings rescue. Prepared Lyla and Brooke had set up a trap to capture them all. They set up a chest and tied the king up inside. The gummibears all rushed inside to get him. When the last one was in Lyla and Brooke closed the door. They turned the key in the lock and walked away forever.

Author's Note

My friend Valerie helped me with this. I thought I'd post this just for kicks. Its amusing to me

Reviews

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Mmmm gummibears! Cute story :)

[♥ Kinnixk]

Gummibears...I love gummibears :D I like the short story; thanks for sharing :)

[None]

A great beginning sketch for a kick a*s short story, somewhat like Small Soldiers. Very nice.

[Taylor H.]

Not sure if its supposed to be gummibears (if it is than it should be Gummibears) but usually its spelled gummy bears.

Growing up in a deserted town, after their father died, they had tp take care of themselves.----whose tp? If its a name it should be TP.

cute story

[Laura Maidah]

"tp"? Do you mean "to take care"? "King's rescue" needs an apostrophe; it's possessive. "Prepared, Lyla and..." needs a comma. "When the last one was in, Lyla" needs a comma. It's a very cute story. I had a chuckle.

[babygirlz]

this is so creative

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well here's that thing. Gummy bears are actually from outer space. They came to brainwash us with their deliciousness just for this reason. One day this will happen. It's Great that someone other than me saw this coming. Nice work. It's funny. And I'm curious (good old me) about what happened after that's all over... hmm

[SeventhSin]

Haha cute and funny. And another funny thing is that when I was done reading this, i scrolled down to post a comment. And guess what I saw? A HUGE gummyworm being eaten by a dude on an ad! Weird right? Well anyways, Great story! Funny, too! You've got a wonderful imagination, my friend. Oh and your friend Valerie, too! Again, nicely done. :)