Hiding

The need to escape

to hide from the watching eye,

to just evaporate

has never been so high.

 

The pull to run away,

to find someone like me

is hard to keep at bay

when I long to be free.

 

No one really knows

hows I really felt,

how I seem to close

when my ice starts to melt.

Author's Note

i really wanna be a writer so i would love any help or any inspiration i can get

Reviews

[afra]

i love this poem ...i relate a lot with this one

[babygirlz]

i love this

[bursting colors]

ive felt this before

[SeventhSin]

I really really like this! It has a really good flow. Just keep doing what your doing gal! If you become a writer, I will definently read your stuff! :)

[Owlgirl]

Easily relatable, I love the last stanza, great writing!

[RachelReaper]

I can relate to this poem and I like the way you ended it. Another great poem of yours I've read. Great job :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

I like it. I've felt this and I put the feeling into my work too. Great poem. Reminds me kinda of "behind blue eyes" the who. I think the second stanza is my favorite. Good job