Hiding

Hiding

A Poem by Mazie Tackett

The need to escape

to hide from the watching eye,

to just evaporate

has never been so high.

 

The pull to run away,

to find someone like me

is hard to keep at bay

when I long to be free.

 

No one really knows

hows I really felt,

how I seem to close

when my ice starts to melt.

© 2012 Mazie Tackett


Author's Note

Mazie Tackett
i really wanna be a writer so i would love any help or any inspiration i can get

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

i love this poem ...i relate a lot with this one

Posted 11 Years Ago


i love this

Posted 11 Years Ago


ive felt this before

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really really like this! It has a really good flow. Just keep doing what your doing gal! If you become a writer, I will definently read your stuff! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Easily relatable, I love the last stanza, great writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I can relate to this poem and I like the way you ended it. Another great poem of yours I've read. Great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it. I've felt this and I put the feeling into my work too. Great poem. Reminds me kinda of "behind blue eyes" the who. I think the second stanza is my favorite. Good job

Posted 11 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

278 Views
7 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 6, 2012
Last Updated on June 6, 2012

Author

Mazie Tackett
Mazie Tackett

AR



About
My name is Mazie Tackett. I'm unusual, diiferent, weird. I've never really been that good with people so I don't have many friends, but the friends I do have love me to death and i love them. I've bee.. more..

Writing
Red Red

A Poem by Mazie Tackett



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..