Unwanted Lust

Unwanted Lust

A Poem by Hoskinsish
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Finally letting go of old scars.

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Unwanted Lust

 

I’ve often went back to that night,

That night when you stole my innocence.

When I yelled NO with all my might,

And your anger was further incensed.

 

I’ve often relived those feeling of disgust,

That I felt as you climbed on top of me

And fulfilled your unwanted lust.

 

For years I tried to run away,                          

Run away from all the pain you caused me.

But I’m done running and I just wanted to say,

I’m no longer imprisoned in that horrific scene.

© 2011 Hoskinsish


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that is a tragic and powerful write. a very raw and introspective piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really a strong piece and it really sounds like coming from a woman who has been violated but has moved on from the dreadful past and is now looking for sweet revenge. With just a few words, you have shown a really strong woman. I loved it. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Inspiring !!
Good work ! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



I like the stark confessionalism in this, the most personal poems are probably the most healing poems we will ever write. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Now you see here is another brave write of yours, I love it, and can sympathize more than you will know publicly but know I feel for you!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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