Shadows Never Play

poem

Shadows I host well 

No secret to tell 

Yep! I roam a lot

yes, visions are caught

Among my chaos 

I don't count the loss,

In stillness I do 

A world so darn blue 

Yet the grays still roam 

On walls of my home,

I will be okay

shadows never play.

Author's Note

Hmm I wonder, if only it was that simple and easy!
I Thank you if you review and figure it out.
BIG THANK YOU

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

First, JB 🌸🐝

I'd like to compliment you on your wondrously rendered art choice, that perfectly befits the ambiance of this rather noir work of Couplets, in spot-on rhymes and vibrant imagery.
In its nuance, I perceive mottled shadows dancing and pirhoueting though the wondrous windmills of your mind, down foggy streams of time, but never threat'ning … only following your vision's fondest schemes.

Hah! Seems you set my imagination wildly aflow.
Thank you for sharing this enjoyably creative piece! ⁓ Richard🖌

[June bug]

Thank you so much for your review

[Richard🖌]

. S u r e .

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I like the depthness of this prose. The rhymes are amazing. Yes, Shadows Never Play they just follows you!

[June bug]

Yep! Thank you for your review

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I definitely think shadows should get the chance to play...it is not fair they don't.

[June bug]

Thank you so much for your review.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Everything isn't black and white, light and dark, but shades of gray can chiaroscuro our thoughts and feelings into dark shadows like a charcoal sketch. Great read.

[June bug]

Thank you so much for your words Fabian. I appreciate it

[Writergurl]

This is amazing really, "Yet the grays still roam" As in life moves all around us all the time. I guess at times we are all too blind to see it. This is wonderful

[June bug]

Thank you so much for your review and understanding

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

Oh so true cous' ?
Shadows are just mere illusions of us, and can haunt.
Sometimes I see myself as a gray area, One that that one ever notices
that is unless they want something from me..
Awesome write.

[June bug]

Thank you my cous'

[Zombified Spider]

This is so amazing and a direct representation of how I feel some days

[June bug]

Thank you so much for your review