What Is Death?

  I am standing here,

  at your grave,

  and wondering

  what it felt

  like when you died.

  Did it hurt?

  Did it feel like nothing?

  Did it feel good?

  

  Did you see anything?

  Did you see God?

  Did you see Satan?

  Can anyone

  answer these 

  questions?

  

  Daniel?

  Fisher?

  Mom?

  Dad?

  Anyone?

Author's Note

kind of bad....

Reviews

[Sarah]

I often wonder death would be like as well. Peaceful in a way? I'm not sure, good questions asked here!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

I disagree---- kinda good this is universal question this Is death the ceasation of life or a continuation on another plane? Are we in limbo for a while only to born again into another life? Is thwere a heaven is there a hell or only oblivion? Valid question I think---- Only the Eternal knows the answers.
Thi is a good poem! Nuff said!

[J.W.]

Short and sad.

[NickyGL]

not bad, it needs a little work. theres very little flow, but the meaning is very strong. I ask myself every day what death feels like.... and i came up with one anwser.. and that is, we dont find out until its time to let go.

[iamkim]

we'll never know what lies ahead... nice one!

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

yya we will never know till it happens

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

Very different kind of poem. But I beleive that if we knew the answer we would have nothimg to live for nothing to strive to learn about

[Shiningwolf]

I wish these questions could be answered. Unfortunally we as humans will never know what happens in the afterlife.

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

These are the questions I wish I could ask my dad, I totally understand..
The poem is heart-felt and amazing, you're a good writer :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The question of death have left many with no answers. I believe death is the end. In my Native American belief. We support to join our elders in a better place. I believe we need to be kind and try to live a good life. Maybe there is a better place? A interesting poem. Always good to end with a open question. A excellent poem.
Coyote