What Is Death?

  I am standing here,

  at your grave,

  and wondering

  what it felt

  like when you died.

  Did it hurt?

  Did it feel like nothing?

  Did it feel good?

  

  Did you see anything?

  Did you see God?

  Did you see Satan?

  Can anyone

  answer these 

  questions?

  

  Daniel?

  Fisher?

  Mom?

  Dad?

  Anyone?

Author's Note

kind of bad....

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

I like it because its so truth. No one can really answer these questions at all and everyone asks them ato one pooint. Great job!

[Erinne S.]

Wow this one also touched my heart as I said in a previous review of your other poem I recently lost a very close friend of mine. I know exactly what you feel right now. You expressed your emotions and your questions well and I enjoyed this piece too.

Great job!

~Erinne

[trainwreck]

This was very sweet and sad. It reminds me of the sort of thing you really think when you stand over a grave. Lovely job Chloe.

[Southern Angel]

good poem

[compositionc]

It was an interesting poem thinking about what happens after dying.

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

aww :/