A Poem by Kamran Javed

Love has not a price to render
It is not an offer to tender
Love wants to be with lovers
It binds souls filled with beauty, whisper
Don't shy open up your heart as a receiver
Not to be ignored and treat as stranger
You made a sign of surrender
A day was 7 of December
A dazzling year of a calendar
Now love giving us happiness and holds tighter
Truly said it makes us brave and stronger

© 2013 Kamran Javed

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Well, truly that's love.It will make you stronger.

Nice concept and ryhming.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I was impressed by the first four lines the most. They were just beautiful.
The 7th, 8th and 9th lines were a little hard to comprehend.
I was with you again in the concluding two lines!

You write so well! Compliments!

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this!!! Very well done Kamran! There is no price with love, at least there's not supposedto does make one stronger, whether it's losing it or having it. Great job ^_^ and birthday is December 5th lol so December is an awesome month xD

Posted 11 Years Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on January 29, 2013
Last Updated on January 29, 2013


Kamran Javed
Kamran Javed

Karachi, Islam, Pakistan

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