Sweet Serenity

***WIND***

 

 

Breath of life,

now consume me.

I come,

to make amend.

I see,

 the smells aside me.

My dear,

 and blessed friend.

Hear,

the colors around me.

 Soul,

 captured completely.

This Grand,

blessed sea of trees.

 Leaves,

 speak to me softly.

 

 The earth,

 slowly becomes me.

Oh,

sweet serenity.

 Oh my,

 Sweet serenity.

 Truly,

blessed within thee

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

Wonderful write Melody...and though I don't usually follow instructions...I did as you asked and reread it with the music as background. A true meditational/yoga experience... I truly felt serene and at ease with the world...and boy can I ever use peace at this time...very soulful and heartfelt write Melody. rhythmic and ethereral...oozing with beautiful images.
Thanks for sharing Melody
allen

[Southern Cross]

I needed this poem today and it lifted my spirits and helped me face my struggles. Thank you . It was excellent in content, form, the musical addition ..well everything

[Raven Starhawk]

This was astonishingly beautiful. It actually took me back a moment to a time when everything didn't seem so bleak. I enjoyed reading this very much. I am glad you shared.

[Brittany]

Oh this is such a lovely relaxing piece. it was calming. well done. keep writing.

[Day Dreamer]

It so wonderful and quite creative. You should send me reading requests to your writing more often. Lol. Great job! :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When we realize that the simple pleasures of life like the love of friends and family are the keys to happiness we can find peace within our souls. Lovely poem.

[EternityWolf101]

Very peaceful and relaxing. I like the music with the poem. It fit perfectly. Nice job.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I love this poem's flow and rhythm! And the music went so well too.

[Leigh]

Oh yes I can feel the effect, very relaxing, how do you do that?

[~LadyWolf~]

Beautiful poem ~ love the video, it is very peaceful :)