When murk shines bright

I don't know why I love this write so much

.

The sunlight chirped again 

as it polished the horizon.

It tried peeping through an abyss,

but unfortunately, 

it tipped over.

 

There was a gorgeous nebula

that composed the whole scenario,

with a clamor.

It was all planned.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is very fresh & inventive: "sunlight chirped" . . . "polished the horizon" -- totally unique ways of describing everyday things. "Peeping thru an abyss & it tipped over" -- I wish I could possess the mind that thinks stuff like this up. Your sassy playfulness comes across loud & clear, which is a quality I see reflected in your profile pic (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[moog-drika]

I always say this and I will still say that reading your write is like a magic pill for me as it helps expand my thoughts. So you pouring your interpretation on my write is nothing but a bliss for me. Thank you so much for that as well as for the praise. Hope I keep pleasing you like this through my write.
Hugs

[Gaurav]

In the grand nature of things, what happens and why happens are questions that are craved by creatives since the dawn of big bang..it excites you too...nice read

[moog-drika]

This is so true. The mystery of the universe is something that can never quench your thirst. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.

[T.S. Ulmus]

What a beautiful use of words. I love to come across a poet who uses the words they feel rather than being caught up with meaning. Good write.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much. This is how I pen my thoughts down. :D

[Lorry]

Our hopes lift at the sight of a new dawn, wondering if this will be a good day, Hope, luck and wishful thinking bring us infinite possibilities, but the dice have been rolled and all we can do is wait with baited breath and see what will be play out.
Perhaps at dusk we should review and be thankful it wasn't any worse 😀
I like this write too. No anger, just acceptance that we do have a say, just not as big a say as we think.

[moog-drika]

This review actually helped me understand my own piece in different way. These 3 factors, hope, luck and wishful do bring infinite possibilities, but there are some invisible players that make the game more unpredictable and us get confused. I guess that's why it triggers us to opt for the saying 'go with the flow.'
However, thank you so much for your
thought-provoking review. Means a lot :D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the vivid personification makes this so creative and alive.
You take a vision of nature and stamp it on our memories.
and i think that WAS the poet's plan.

j.

[moog-drika]

These words really made my day. Thank you so much for taking a ride to my write and thank you so much for the praise. Now I started feeling that it could be the poet's plan. :D

[Ana Papaya]

Cool imagery in this one.
Like a back drop for one of this inspirational scenes or posters.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for your review. :D

[Just Kim]

I loved that first stanza, this is very good

[moog-drika]

Thanks a bunch! :D

[Paul Bell]

This is like the British summer.
You blink and suddenly a Nebula is displaying herself like the girl next door.

[moog-drika]

hahaha Nebula is certainly a very mysterious character. Thanks a bunch for your interpretation. :D

[Unspoken poet]

This is a wonderful write, most enjoyed this

[moog-drika]

Thanks a bunch. ❤️

[Robert Trakofler]

you can never trust a nebula Moog they are shifty characters! one day all sparkly and inviting the next eating up your chasms and filling up your voids with fresh shiny topsoil:/ yes they are sneaky sneaky sneaky

[moog-drika]

hahahaahaha I never laughed so hard by reading an interpretation that too of my poetry!!
Yes, I agree. They have different personalities and we can never know what goes on in their mind. Such a universal player!
I really loved how you literally explained the picture my piece tried to show. It was soooo the best. hahaha