When murk shines bright

I don't know why I love this write so much

.

The sunlight chirped again 

as it polished the horizon.

It tried peeping through an abyss,

but unfortunately, 

it tipped over.

 

There was a gorgeous nebula

that composed the whole scenario,

with a clamor.

It was all planned.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is very fresh & inventive: "sunlight chirped" . . . "polished the horizon" -- totally unique ways of describing everyday things. "Peeping thru an abyss & it tipped over" -- I wish I could possess the mind that thinks stuff like this up. Your sassy playfulness comes across loud & clear, which is a quality I see reflected in your profile pic (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[moog-drika]

I always say this and I will still say that reading your write is like a magic pill for me as it helps expand my thoughts. So you pouring your interpretation on my write is nothing but a bliss for me. Thank you so much for that as well as for the praise. Hope I keep pleasing you like this through my write.
Hugs

[Chris Shaw]

So visual is this write moog-drika. . I have a sunset in my head reading these lines. An explosion of brightness just before the sun slips below the horizon for the night.

Chris

[moog-drika]

This is such a beautiful interpretation perfectly enhancing the saturation of the view it shows. I miss seeing all the beauty of the nature, thus imagination is all I have, to enjoy it. Thank you so much for the compliment. It really means a lot.

[Chris Shaw]

Imagination can help us a great deal, especially in dark times.

[moog-drika]

So true! It does help. :'D

[Jonathan]

I must admit I’m a bit confused. I haven’t been keeping up with poetry lately perhaps you could clue me in on what you were thinking when you wrote this.

[moog-drika]

Hahhaa it's okay. I usually dont explain my poetry because I think that kills its essence. I rathet let people add meaning to it. Because the more the interpretation, the more different meanings it will have. So, all I can say is that this is just a thought that came to my mind and I penned it down. Hope you enjoy this confusion and get a light in the dark. :D

[Abhishek Asthana]

Almost a fusion and it displays with beauty of the nature... nicely framed,,, Keep writing !

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for your interpretation. Means a lot. :D

[wordman]

i guess they still exist ,a mistaken beauty

[moog-drika]

I should learn how to summarize a poem in just one line from you! It's spot on!

[wordman]

learn from me,lol i don`t know anything about writing

[moog-drika]

Hahaha nais sarcasm!

[wordman]

no,not sarcasm ,humble

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem too. The poem danced to perfect ending. You allowed the reader to see the miracle too. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for your interpretation! It means a lot!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.