Glittery Sunset

Glittery Sunset

A Poem by Huggy Bear
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the sun setting

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As the world grows quiet
The sun bows out gracefully
As it sets
The sun shows a different side
Like the fall

The sun changes color
It goes from a brilliant yellow
To a dim and
warm orange glow
It dips ever so slowly
It grants us  time

To witness its softer side
before it goes to the other side of the world
It envelopes the landscape

Showering the world with tranquility









© 2010 Huggy Bear




Reviews

Very good concept and execution overall. I agree the first stanza could be better.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice work. I have a problem with the first stanza in general. Too simple and doesn't demonstrate the talent that I know you have. Too dull. Especially, the third line. "As it sets" As it sets? Sets? I need more. Adjectives, anything. Otherwise, nice job on doing the requirements.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


i love this truly beautiful in its simplicity. well done meeting the challenge.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


A nice short piece, long on sentiment.:)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


So nice and I really love sunset

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Posted 11 Years Ago


wow..short but beautiful. i love the sunset..especially when you're with the one you love and your family of course.. Thanks.. keep it up!

:)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Nothing as beautiful as a beautiful sunset. A six pack of beer and a lot of time with the sunset. A good night. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice for a short poem. Thanks for posting in the group.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice short one. Beautiful nontheless!

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Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 30, 2010
Last Updated on April 12, 2010
Tags: Sun, quiet, grace

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Huggy Bear
Huggy Bear

Astoria, NY



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