I am invincible

No i really feel that way:)

What an ugly feeling to be weak

with fear i was playing hide and seek...

But the decision is in my hand 

wether i sit or stand

wether i keep running

or stop hiding...

I chose to fight

the past had hurt me a lot,

 it's time to put the last dot!

No more tears,

those tears have made me strong

but keeping on crying is wrong;

I will embrasse the fact 

that it's all just a memory from the past

because now I'm leaving all the hard times behind

and a note that you might find:

"I AM INVINCIBLE"

Author's Note

well it's abit of a revealing of the true me, ihope the you will like it :)

Reviews

[KAin]

Hello again! Feels like it's been a while...
Other than a few typos I spotted - 'embrace' instead of 'embrasse', and 'whether', in place of 'wether' -
I like this poem! Shows a true fighting spirit - fitting with the name, eh, Brave Girl?
Keep up the good work, friend.

[Brave girl]

thank you for the nicereview and for giving me pointers about my stupid typos !!!

[Rahul]

Good job, i liked the theme of the piece. Well ... am glad that your now strong :) So, stay strong and yes it's true "Keeping on crying is wrong" well said .. keep writing, your good at writing.1

[Brave girl]

thank you so much dear writer !

[Prritiy]

I chose to fight
the past had hurt me a lot,
it's time to put the last dot!
No more tears,
.
.
"I AM INVINCIBLE"

Voice of a Brave girl :) yes you are invincible, a true you, a fighter and tears are not always a sign of weakness but dispelling the venom inside.

best wishes

[Brave girl]

well most people consider tears as a sign of weakness and that's why people doesn't cry in front of others, so afraid of people's eyes and what is going through their minds... thank you soo much for the sweet loving review =D

[Prritiy]

spill away whenever you feel the venom is filling inside you, don't think of people they really don't help :)
hugs to you :)

[Brave girl]

exactly...well thanks a alot!!
warm huggggggs to u too!! =D

[Prritiy]

:)..........

[Sami Khalil]

This was soooo good and amazing. You are a fighter and those with that spirit are survivors too...Bravo

[Brave girl]

thank you dear writer it's such a nice comment,i appreciate it =D

[Sami Khalil]

I'm so glad you like it...Take care...:).........