GRAVE: The Last Omen EP Single New album coming soon

GRAVE: The Last Omen EP Single New album coming soon

A Poem by Nicaushio Yamaki
"

The new EP Single album is a hobby band I decided to do on the side; however, I am still doing the band of SWICK. I just thought that I can make another band on the side.

"

GRAVE

The last Omen

1)    A heart of shells

 

As I walk, into your hands

When the dead rise

May I ever will be

Awake to see

 

Take out my soul

As the death of me

Walks in the

Wicked pastors

 

When all hope is gone

Thy lore cries

In the mist of

Betrayal

 

My graven image

Dies into a storm

Within a horror

Itself

 

As I grew into your

Eyes my darkness

Comes a new

Never before taken

Away to fade

Though my death

Will be forgotten

 

My soul is driven to

The lost clouds

Of doom

 

Even though my pain

Has given in

As the more my will

Being crumbles

Away

 

Into the wind of loneliness

The pain has brought

Me sorrow to

Speak in torment

 

As I walk together

In my lonely path

I will forever

Be unknown

 

2)    A fallen face

 

Are you lost?

Let it be thy name

The curtains of

False is in your

Favor

 

In the deaths of me

You shall find many

Forgotten with pain

Feast to stay

Existence

 

As I walk among the dead

To a new world

My soul has become

A new

 

Once more

My eyes in the light

Of joy can never

Be touched

 

I sought the only

Reality of my past

Into dust

 

I’ve given up the

Many days I cried

In death

 

My memories remain

As my punishment

Though in due time

It will become

My second death

 

The pastors of the

Stream is near when a

Last song passes

By in the darkest

Force in the years

© 2011 Nicaushio Yamaki


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

This is one of those situation were the image created is completely different from the writing. It took me by suprise. I have been an active reviewer and related to online sites for music. Especially up and coming which is another way to say "obscure", so when I saw this I thought. Ready! for some bestial putrefaction! With a Chris Barnes guttaral scream. I was met by soft elegant, refined artistic, embracing good use of language rhyme structure semi romamantic longing for transcendence. In fact if you took the whole image and uhhhhs & ahhhhs of the picture you have created your writing will shine even more that it already does!

Great writing although I feel cheated by the image.


Thankyou

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

This is one of those situation were the image created is completely different from the writing. It took me by suprise. I have been an active reviewer and related to online sites for music. Especially up and coming which is another way to say "obscure", so when I saw this I thought. Ready! for some bestial putrefaction! With a Chris Barnes guttaral scream. I was met by soft elegant, refined artistic, embracing good use of language rhyme structure semi romamantic longing for transcendence. In fact if you took the whole image and uhhhhs & ahhhhs of the picture you have created your writing will shine even more that it already does!

Great writing although I feel cheated by the image.


Thankyou

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is killer, beautiful writing. I reside in the darkness and love to read lyrics like this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I loved these both so dark and abstract and I couldn't help but sing them alone in my room cause I just have to hear songs aloud. Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think "The Last Omen" is a really nice title because there are several signs of finality in these lyrics. You have ideas of death and loss and lack of completion. Those elements are very strong themes which really drive home what you are staying.

My favorite lines are "My graven image/ Dies into a storm/ Within a horror/Itself"

Posted 10 Years Ago


WOAHH! Excellent love..powerfully imagery and a dose of sadness streaking throughout!
xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW very gothic! =] The imagery is genius =]

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

637 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Added on May 30, 2011
Last Updated on May 30, 2011

Author

Nicaushio Yamaki
Nicaushio Yamaki

Japan



About
Hello everyone, Anything you would like to know just ask me. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..