Your Lips

Your Lips

A Poem by MandaBear
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I made this for someone I really like so very much. I doubt he will ever see this but here it is. I hope you like it!

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Your lips are so full and perfect. 

I wish I could plant a Hollywood kiss on them.

Something so perfect and so hard to explain.

I would love to kiss them in the rain. 


You sing with those pink lips.

Sweet sounds come out of your mouth.

Just to hear you sing is a treat.

I would love to be the mic you sing into.


I wish your lips would meet mine. 

I can only imagine the softness of them.

The warmth they must give when they meet.

I would love to be the puzzle piece that fits your lips.


Your lips are the eighth wonder.

Seen by all around the world.

A masterpiece in one place.

I would love my lips to be your eighth wonder.


Your lips are like a treasure of a wondrous tomb.

We see the gold but dare not say their name.

A symbol of power and passions to the tomb robber.

I would love to be your archaeologist.


Your mouth is my drug and your lips are my addiction.

Your lips tease me and call me to kiss them.

Your love is the cure for this poison.

I would love my lips to be your drug.


Your lips are a masterpiece just waiting to be painted.

I would paint the lips which I am so eager to touch.

Like the rays of the sun set passes the horizon,

They bounce back with beautiful rays that sink into the sky.


How I wish to kiss your lips.

To kiss them in the rain.

What I wouldn't do to get that Hollywood feeling.

To get a chance to plant a kiss on your lips.

© 2013 MandaBear




Reviews

This is really very nice, only line I'd rephrase would be "get a kiss in the rain", perhaps GET is not the right word.. But that's just me! Great job. :)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


That is amazing. Your A TRUE writer.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


MandaBear

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Love this!!!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 27, 2013
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Tags: lips, poetry, love, guy, romance


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