I remember when I met you

I remember when I met you

A Poem by MandaBear
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Inspiration from Rob Stewart's "Have I told you Lately That I Love you" Video at the bottom*

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 I remember when I met you 
Wish I could hold you and say I love you 
Send away all the madness
Take away all the sadness
Take away all our troubles too

Tell people all about our story 
You saying I love you too
I love to hear your laughter
Makes my world so much better
Takes away our troubles too 
I am glad your love is mine
and I want more and it's just fine my valentine
Each and everyday 
You should know i'll stay 
with you Hun,with you Hun


 I remember when I met you 
Wish I could hold you and say I love you 
Send away all the madness
Take away all the sadness
Take away all our troubles too
Tell people all about our story 
You saying I love you too
I love to hear your laughter
Makes my world so much better
Takes away our troubles too 
I am glad your love is mine
and I want more and it's just fine my valentine
Each and everyday 
You should know i'll stay 
with you Hun,with you Hun
 I remember when I met you 
Wish I could hold you and say I love you 
Send away all the madness
Take away all the sadness
Take away all our troubles too
Send away all the madness
Take away all the sadness
Take away all our troubles too
Send away all the madness
Take away all the sadness
Take away all our troubles too

© 2013 MandaBear


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I am always amazed when I think I can hear I begin to hear this person's voice inside of me. I think this is the real magik of writing. This is so musikal!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awww! This is beautiful! I love it! < 3

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is absolutely beautiful! Great write...I love the emotion. It's one of the greatest tools you can use in writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is an amazing write, Am. I loved it, you're really good at the lyrics! I agree with dw817. Sing one for us, hehehe.

~ Noodle.

Posted 10 Years Ago


MandaBear

10 Years Ago

I would except I totally cant sing! The cat of the fence would tell me to shut up lol
s y e

10 Years Ago

Haha, I love singing, haha.
Thank you for the amazing poetry. Ron gave you some positive motivation. Good memories allowed us to travel to good places and remember kind faces. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Wow ! You're really getting good at these lyrics, Amanda ! Nicely done ! You should totally sing some of these and record 'em so we can hear 'em !

Posted 10 Years Ago


dw817

10 Years Ago

Aww shoot, anyone can sing. It don't take any skilll to do stuff like that. If you can sing, "Polly .. read more
MandaBear

10 Years Ago

lol well maybe some day it will happen who knows
dw817

10 Years Ago

Lemme know when you're ready and I'll point you to the right software for it. Just think, you could .. read more
well written , good work ..

Posted 10 Years Ago


i like your lyrical writes...they all seem like legitimate song lyrics!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on June 28, 2013
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Tags: romance, love, remembering, lyrics, song


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