Evil powers

No its not about Johnny Depp for once lol But it is about a crush I do have. I would tell you but its kinda embarrassing lol (my crush is not famous either)

Seduce me with your evil powers.

Take me as your prisoner, 

Make me your slave, 

Do with me as you will. 

Use those accents to get what you want.

I will be putty in your hands.

Use your muscles to lift me up,

Get me out of this darkness and into the light.

Perfect hair, muscles, and body,

The things I would do. 

Your perfect skin, voice, and lips;

Oh, the kisses I would steal.

English, Spanish, and French roll off your perfect tongue.

Seducing your every desire out,

Getting them without a fight. 

You are my fantasy.

Seduce me with your evil powers.

I am your prisoner,

I am your slave,

Tame my wild. 

Use your dreams against me. 

You be the doctor, 

I will be your patient, 

 Find the cure for my diease.

Perfect hair, muscles and body.

I want to touch and feel,

Feel the rush of emotions flow.

Become one with your evil.

You take me as I am, 

Making every good turn evil.

Fully taken over my body,

Your evil has become my evil.

Seduce me with your evil powers.

I am your prisoner,

I am your slave, 

I am your evil.......

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Wasn't i your prince?! I'm getting jealous !! xD
Ok, now, being serious, this poem is amazing:
Flow? What can i say, it's perfect ! Nice idea of adding refrains to the poem. Metrica? Great use of quatrains. Pathos? There's enough for this and other two poems xD
So, again, good job ! :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

real seductive work indeed... ;)

[Ink Angel]

I love it! an outstanding write, love the darkside to it. Thank you.

[Starr Mist]

Very good, i think every girl with a crush feels.like this! Good work!

[dan nacario]

reminds me of Bram Stoker's Dracula..
nice poem..so dark..

[Coyote Poetry]

"Use your dreams against me.
You be the doctor,
I will be your patient,
Find the cure for my diease."
I enjoyed the flow of thoughts and the desire in the words. Good to open doors to needing touch and passion. I like the complete poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[The White Wolf]

Amanda.....is this about Johnny Depp? LOL :) If it is, I likee! If it is not, it should be! What a sinfully fun poem. Nice work!

[Abbie]

interesting poem Amanda. I like it. keep writing! :)