Feel my Wrath

I know its not a good thing to feel so much anger towards someone, but i wrote this some years ago and it was a really tough time for me, writing how i felt - helped me to get over it....

I feel like screaming out loud,

Ripping his eardrums with the sound.

Clawing at his face,

Hurt him, like he hurt me, in the same place.

Then I'll rip out his heart:

Stab that bloody black thing with a dart;

Make it bleed, like he bled mine,

And act like its all fine.

I want to pulverize his brain,

'Cause for love it’s a drain;

A scheming little thing of evil,

In the dark head of a devil.

I want to tear apart his grotesque soul

Into tiny little pieces - no more whole.

Burn it fiercely in a fire hearth,

Into ashes, scattered on earth.

Turn him into nothing - a void in his place,

No, not even that - its such a waste of space.

 

But in the end, this is all:

I curl myself into a ball,

The fire of rage burn out,

And then - I cry my soul out…

 

                                                     

Reviews

[PoeticVandal]

so much anger...... so much hate..... such emotion...
welcome to the dark side of the force....hehehe

[The Dreamer]

oh! you do sound evil :P thank you :)

[Deron Alexis]

very expressive very violent and emotional you really found a way to capture your feelings and rage well done this was great

[The Dreamer]

thank you :)

[J Todd Underhill]

Love the read, I chose the because of the title but the strong writing kept my eyes pouring over this one! I would love to hear it performed on my show!

[The Dreamer]

THANKS a lot. im glad you like it enough to be performed in your show! it means a lot to me :)

[J Todd Underhill]

You should call the show 303-386-3598 10pm Eastern time Fridays, you can listen live at www.kzkoradio.com and check out the show site www.worldpoetryopenmic.net

[The Dreamer]

i will . thank you :)

[Melody]

wow. deep.

[The Dreamer]

thanks :)