I'll Stick to My Stories...

I'll Stick to My Stories...

A Poem by LunarSong


I’ll stick to my stories,

I’ll stick to my fair words.

They bring me no worries,

With their fantasy swords.

No, no, never mind that,

I want an adventure!

Goodbye my lovely cat!

To forests I’ll venture!

Watch out world here I come,

With my wit and humor,

And some ink on my thumb.

I will take my future

And turn it upside down.

I’ll decide the world’s fate,

Even without a crown.

I refuse that I'm late.

With my paper and pen

I’ll write my own stories,

Create new worlds, and then

I’ll denounce those worries.

I will tell them of hope,

My views, my mind’s travels.

I’ll cut that evil rope

Of grief’s dirty battles.

The world is beautiful,

You just have to see it,

It’s indisputable, 

Once the dark has been lit.

And so, I’ll see the world

It’s forests and beaches,

But on the scrolls uncurled

Is where the past teaches

And where my power lies.

I loved my adventure

It has made me more wise,

With every new venture.

I’ll stick to my stories

I’ll stick to my fair words,

I don’t look for glories,

I seek to help the world.

© 2014 LunarSong


Author's Note

LunarSong
Please review and rate ;) Thanks for reading it! Also... I don't really have a cat, just had to get that off my chest ;) Please tell me what you think :P

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I love how you started and ended the same way, that was a great story technique. The rhythm flowed easy, I didn't find myself struggling to get through it. It was a great work of art that I thoroughly enjoyed reading and I hope to read more from you


Posted 4 Years Ago


LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. :)
I liked this, it took the reader on a fun journey with the speaker.

The world is beautiful,
You just have to see it,
It’s indisputable,
Once the dark has been lit.

Loved those lines, they speak so much truth. Most people don't look for the beauty in the world anymore, just its faults, so you bring up an important point. One thing I would say is that you may want to seperate this into stanzas. Just a thought, but either way I enjoyed it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


LunarSong

5 Years Ago

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it.
That blew my mind! It was kinda cool the way it turns into the beginning at the end.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Farrsight

5 Years Ago

That is what I'm talking about!
LunarSong

5 Years Ago

Well thank you :)
Farrsight

5 Years Ago

yup! welcome!
This has some pretty ... interesting rhymes! (cat?) Well done! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


LunarSong

5 Years Ago

This has gone longer than I'd a thought.
Alverrann

5 Years Ago

I 'gree with that
LunarSong

5 Years Ago

I'll make it twenty, that's a good finishing place ;)

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