One Second Passing

One Second Passing

A Poem by Mitji

Just one I came up w/ on a whim based on a quick second passing with someone at the mall!


I was walking when I felt a stare

I looked up and saw him there

A boy who made my heart go boom

Looking at me as if I was the only one in the room


His eyes are what kept me staring back

Beautiful gorgeous and black

Into his soul, his eyes were used as a lure

For me to see his heart, oh, so pure


A private understanding between us, there was passed

I couldn't believe how this could have happend so fast

And then it was over just like that

I continued walking as he just stared and sat


I had never seen him before

But I wish I could see him more

I replay the moment again and again

I wonder "will you forget?" I do not think I can


I will never forget those eyes

And heart that held no lies

I did not even get to say hi

Nor did I get to say goodbye

© 2009 Mitji

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Wow this is really brilliant, and heartfelt.
Cheesy? Yout thought this was cheesy? This is great! I love especially how you ended.
Great job,


Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely penned, great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago

you know I love this one! not cheesy at all like you said it was. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on March 6, 2009
Last Updated on March 8, 2009



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