-OMG-

OMG

Save me from this toture.

Life at home is not great.

Hatred between my father and I.

So much hostility.

I think to myself

"Only one more year"

One more year is not enough.

I need to get out of here

Out of this torture.

Someone save me,

Anyone

OMG

So much pain!

Reviews

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write full of emotion

[ashley]

This is good. You did well conveying the emotion. I could feel the frustration. Good job! :D

[A.Lee]

I know what its like to have enmity between yourself and your parent. Its not easy to deal with and time just creeps by as slowly as possible. Well spoken. I hope things get better.

[~ Otto Girl ~]

im sorry hun. I wish i could help. This poem is good way to show your emotion.

[Ruth]

Wow, intense, time feels as though it lasts for an eternity in situations as this, thoughts go to you! A moving piece xx