a brother and astrology.

heavily inspired by periphery - eriesed. about my brother albert who has helped me through some difficult times and i thought i'd throw some astrology in it (my brother is a libra).

drenched in regret

the knife's cutting in deep

deaths appropriation 

its beckoning me.

a cold poor soul, he's lost his way

relieve me of this pain

a heavy cost, just wandering

complaining in this state of mind.

it's what i'm running from.

but theres a distance sound of a melody (meloday).

its here to save the day

(chorus)

within the depths, i've become adept

with the libra scale

balancing

harmony cures.

i've let emotion set in motion what's in my heart

let this virgos rebirth start.

behind this false delight

theres a bitter taste.

no longer with its preaching

depressions now delayed.

lying down

the night sky is now filled with flashing lights.

these stars are teaching me now. 

a lighter cost, exploring this intricate state of mind.

is this what i've been running from?

the closer sounds of the melody(meloday)

let me face a new day.

(chorus)

within the depths, i've become adept

with the libra scale

balancing

harmony cures.

i've let emotion set in motion what's in my heart

let this virgos rebirth start.

Author's Note

my first time writing lyrics. i know it don't flow well but hey we all gotta start somewhere? feedback is appreciated.

Reviews

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

I also really like the chorus :3 Really great job, aside from the flow a bit. :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Flow is a little choppy but I don't know what tune was in your head when you wrote it. Great words as always though

[Wild Willow Blue]

I love it! The flow is great, don't doubt yourself. I can feel the emotion you put into this piece; it's very raw and real. Great work.

[...]

Awesome chorus line! The whole song has a good deep meaning to it. Great work :)

[That_Girl]

I love the chorus... the astrology thrown in makes it really strong.

"behind this false delight

theres a bitter taste.

no longer with its preaching

depressions now delayed." - This is wonderful. Well done!

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks for that! much appreciate it