memories of a gig

ah...the brutality of metal gigs. based off a time i went to see 5 bands in one night with a good friend of mine.

I don’t wanna rave, I wanna have fun

Until the rise of the sun.

I can see the sea of sweat

I plunge right in. I don’t care if im swept,

Away with the atmosphere

The electricity is crystal clear.

Igniting the air, to be fair

I’m tired but I don’t need a chair.

The pit is open, a wall of death

S**t scared, the devil may care.

You hit my nose! My eyes are closed,

I’m gripping my face with pain.

You better divide or fight cause boy I’m about to go f*****g insane.

drunk with rage, message received

apology? Weapon sheathed.

We have a laugh, enjoy the crowd.

The bass that has made us proud,

To be part of a night

A night that I see,

Forever in my memories. 

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Awesome poetic interpritation of a gig.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Well described and full of the intensity of the night. Some things we always remember.

[Celestial Witch Child]

Sexy rock show. Love it. You put me right there. Amazing work.

[XxxModifyTheMassesxxX]

That was amazing!!! well constructed. i loved it. keep it up man!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awesome. Simply Awesome.

[Laura Maidah]

OMGOMGOMGOMG. THIS BLOWS MY MIND OFF. WOW

[That_Girl]

Really descriptive, the imagery is great. Only thing I saw was two of the lines start in lowercase while the rest are capitalized. Just what I thought. :) Loved it!