an angel

this of inspired by one of broken dream's character, balancer angel. name Zachary West, true name Regenfrithu. this character is in a book 'Our World Of Glasses'

i guess i really got the cursed

the curse of the balancer

it is a terrible one to bear

i have one white feathered wing on my left side

and one black dragon wing on my right side

i have white hair of the creation angel

and the eyes of the destruction angel

worst of all, i cursed with ears of an elf

i have a hard job

i must keep the balance of dark and light

fire and water

earth and air

hate and love

death and life

if there's no balancer angel

everything will be messed up

i should be proud to be a balancer angel

but i dont like it

btw i have called from Apollyon

sorry, i must go

see ya..

the story

Author's Note

what do you think, broken dream?
btw, sorry if this is not fit with his job, i cant think another job..
and thanks~

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

It's hard thinking of fantasy plots you know... even I can't think well of a lot of characters

[Irvette Dauphine]

my mind is full of imagination and i want that all is true :)
that's my secret :D

[The dark story]

such a great and imaginative thought...i really like it....but..i wanna ask you something.."i should be proud to be balancer angel".....shouldn't there be "a" after be.........and there is no word like "balancer".....i would rather say"a balancing angel" IN my humble opinion.........but overall ,the poem is really enthralling and the theme is awesome.......great work!!!!!:)(don't mind please.but i have suggested you what i thought was right)

[Irvette Dauphine]

i know balancing, but to explain he is balancing the world so i use 'r'. 'balancer'
like writing 'writer', right?

[The dark story]

yes ,you can say it that way...but it's not my fault if this word is not there in the dictionary........sorry.please don't get me wrong:(

[Irvette Dauphine]

it's okay..
i just explain why i use 'balancer' word, not to tell that you're wrong..

[icerhex]

Wow, this concept is really cool. A great idea and I like your writing style too ^.^

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Weeping Willow]

really good. Loved it

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[F.P. Chat]

Hey I really liked this one. I find it your best so far, i will keep reading...good job!

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Leave me alone....]

this is awesome :D very nice. i like it a lot, worth 100/100

[Irvette Dauphine]

:D
thanks~

[Owlgirl]

This is great. Very well written :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

thnkas~

[Irvette Dauphine]

*thanks~

[Owlgirl]

Lol your welcome, it was exceptional!

[Irvette Dauphine]

i just think to be that character and write this with what i fell :)

[Crimson Bayonet]

Nice work, I like it :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~