Ethereal Love

Ethereal Love

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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Written 4-10-21

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Wrapped in an ethereal curtain
Shimmering with an astral glow
City lights extinguished far away
Leaving untouched natural beauty
Drifting within the cosmic gateway

A lone figure waiting silently
Stars illuminating his outline
Mystical sight to clearly behold
Surrounded by desert’s midnight
Chasing away the dry arid cold

An otherworldly sight to embrace
Patiently waiting with open arms
Silently calling out my name
As the Universe pulls it’s tight strings
This rhythmic beating heart you claim

Shadowed rock formation stand tall
Stoic guardians of the moment
Adding a violet mystical feel
Celestial orbs streaking freely
Eternally this love is real

© 2021 Poetic Beauty


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I love your way of packing a poem with a ton of sparkling sensory observations that pop! This sounds like it's been written about a human companion, but also it could be any imaginary connection we may long for . . . a missing angel, or God, or self-love (which most are lacking some) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Weeks Ago

It is about someone special. But I did write it with little to of imagery so it has a ethereal feel .. read more



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I love your way of packing a poem with a ton of sparkling sensory observations that pop! This sounds like it's been written about a human companion, but also it could be any imaginary connection we may long for . . . a missing angel, or God, or self-love (which most are lacking some) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Weeks Ago

It is about someone special. But I did write it with little to of imagery so it has a ethereal feel .. read more
This is such a wonderful and beautiful write

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you. I write a lot of poems from my dreams.
Unspoken poet

3 Weeks Ago

my dreams would run people off, mine are very life like scary
Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

Mine can be but fortunately most of mine are sensual and loving


........................... Dont you just love an astral glow .. a delightful poem my friend .. write on :)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

4 Weeks Ago

Astral glow is amazing...
I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. I write a lot of sappy poetry the.. read more
Such a beautiful piece. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you for the kind words
out of this world. so beautiful. mesmerizing as love is. i sense the longing of that separation between the lines. we wait patiently, our hearts skipping beats until wrapped together again in those arms ... :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

You have definitely got the feeling right in this poem
Misty romance. A fine an example of this as I have seen. well done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Thank you. I write many poems from my dreams or day dreams I have
Awhh how lovely
this poem truly is
with a soft flowing
ethereal feel indeed

love is captured within
distance and time of
a cosmic atmosphere
with starlight splendour

nice work here***

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Thank you. I closed my eyes and this is what I daydreamed
  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

a lovely poem
you have created
with your talented
pen..really nice verse
When a love can survive a long distance relationship...it is definitely ethereal in such a beautiful sense as you have described it here.
I can't write love poems...you can.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

We are just friends but he knows how I feel. I put up with his stubborn a*s and he deals with me mak.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

I feel HE is the lucky one, PB.
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Well thank you for saying so. He has lot of patience with me. He is in a relationship at the moment .. read more
Dreamy and atmospheric, imagining your love in those mystical surroundings when you can't be with him. You certainly paint a lovely canvas with your words and violet is a favourite colour. Any shade of purple I love. Very nicely conveyed PB.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

I often use different shades of purple for it is my favorite color. I’m glad you liked the atmosph.. read more
Chris

1 Month Ago

What lovely dreams you have :)

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Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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