Melt With You

Can you feel

The heart shudder

When the hand is

Placed upon the breast?

 

Do you hear

The delicate

Action

Of the inward

Breath?

 

Can you absorb

The need

To be close

To you?

 

Does the magic

Of emotions

Not yet

Developed

Tap at your

Being?

 

Does your heart

Flutter

As lips part

Tongues meeting?

 

Does the uniqueness

Of scent

Intrigue you

As she melts in your

arms ?

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

YES...YES...a thousand times yes
beautifully written ... wonderful colorful and breathtaking imagery
loved the way you questioned without needing an answer...and left it uncertain whether the answers are yes....or no..
well done PB
I always enjoy reading your poetry....makes me think, you know?
allen

[Dark Poetry]

So good, I always enjoy reading your works

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A very moist piece of work, if it were possible of course,w ell done, good read.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Wow, this is great. Deeply romantic, with great expression. Awesome job!

[Jibey]

This poem was touching and affecting.. the thought of the hand on the breast was melting indeed and the gentle blend of emotion and physical sensation created a bouquet of delight

[Dream Weaver]

I couldn't have described it any better..
Nicely done..

[Aidz]

flowed like treacle :)

[Michael X]

beautiful work, I'm glad I read this artistry, you capture the identity of
the true meaning of form, and the feeling this poem has, is a sacred
emotion that expresses to a greater cause. excellent work here :)
depthfully romantic: yummy!

[Wondering Mind]

like hot butter and honey