Unrelenting Need

A dream that keeps on sailing through the mind.

Moonlight cascades

Shimmering silver

Light

Upon the naked soul

Caressing with

Brilliance

Wrapped in mystery

 

The a reoccurring

Dream

Glistens with dewy

Pleasure in the mind

Revealing

A need that

Has been suppressed

 

Magnetic figure

Standing in the

Shadows

Illuminated by

Silver stardust

And

Amethyst emotions

 

Tattooed vision

Of unrelenting

Desire

Gazing across

A lake of internal

Distance

Silently stands

With unrelenting

Need

Reviews

[Sethnicity]

I love the word usage here... Unrelenting need, Shadows Illuminated, Amethyst emotions,Caressing with brilliance; very well done. I only see one wobble and that is the double use of unrelenting in the last stanza "unrelenting desire", but I'm not sure if its there to add emphasis to the next time it's used or what but in any case... I feel it and that is most important.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for the kind review and pointing out the repetitive word. I tried to find another word to fit the emotions and I couldn't so I have left it unchanged.

[Sethnicity]

I totally get it though... I myself need to reach deeper into other languages to find words that can color my hypothetical thoughts...

[Poetic Beauty]

It is very hard sometimes for me to get emotions put on paper but once the words come it seems to flow effortlessly

[MoriartyMesa]

The flow is brilliant, this could be a person, place or moment in time, opens the reader into what ever interpretation they come away with.


Nice job PB

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Mystery can be terrifying and exciting at the same time. A very interesting dream indeed and something only your heart can decipher.

[Dark Poetry]

I can clearly see each word in this poem, Beautiful.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Great imagery.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

The reoccurring dream glistens with dewy pleasure in the mind..lovely

[Revery]

Oh wow, such beautiful metaphors and lovely imagery. Excellent write. One little possible typo, first line of second stanza, should the "a" be there.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good vision create by the powerful poem. Description took me to thoughts and memories. I did like like the strong ending.
"Silently stands
With unrelenting
Need"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote