Priceless Treasure

Priceless Treasure

A Poem by Marvin Lewis Jr.

 


Priceless treasure


Lets try to kiss until the moon sits on the ocean with

our eyes closed,

this is another realm so we see clearer than if they

were wide open.

Your tone of voice is beautiful so lets try to

converse until the sun gets off and the stars take

their places while the ocean blackens until whatever

was bothering you is forgotten.

 Lets try to stare into each others eyes just to see

where it takes us,

I’ll stare into yours and you’ll stare into mine then

we'll break our concentration to embrace and get

comfortable for the long ride back from heaven.

With you everyday is fun so time really flies I just

want to hold you in my arms to make is stand still for

a few seconds.

Seconds that I like to call precious moments some go

to the beach at the days end but watching your face

blossom from one expression to another is my sunset,

I dream about you like the child does his wish list

the night before christmas.

Your words go into my soul’s ear,

and when I feel your skin its like touching God’s mind

with my fingertips,

I've always wanted to travel now every time I lay eyes

on you eternity is where I pay a visit.

If I were a painter my love would be the brush and you

the canvas,

I'm a musician you are the eighty eight keys that

allow my rhythm and the listener to have a

conversation.

I want you, without you in my I’m like a clock with no

hands,

without you days are too long and nights don’t feel

priceless.

Without you silence is frightening whereas in your

presence it felt like everything,

when you’re gone the sun doesn’t wake-up and stars

don’t take their places so at night I find myself

lamenting while my hands hold the only thing left of

you and that's a portrait.

 With a heavy heart I eat breakfast then pray and

asked God for one wish and that is to be given another

opportunity...

Because if I can't grow old with you there is no

reason for living.

© 2009 Marvin Lewis Jr.


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I'm a musician you are the eighty eight keys that
allow my rhythm and the listener to have a
conversation.
This is another write that makes me see life differently. You magnificently create one
great work after another. The images and rhythm of this piece are lulling.

Without you silence is frightening whereas in your
presence it felt like everything,
...you gently force the reader to feel your emotion!

when you're gone the sun doesn't wake-up and stars
don't take their places so at night I find myself
lamenting while my hands hold the only thing left of
you and that's a portrait.

Your adoration is clearly defined here-making this so meaningful.
This is definitely another favorite!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A beautiful heartfelt poem that touched my heart so deeply, Marvin ... You penned your emotions so tenderly, so beautifully. Priceless! Hugs - Tiana

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent emotion Marvin........each word flows into the next......Your poetry gets better with each new creation my friend........well done number one......

Peace,

Bill

Posted 15 Years Ago


I would have to agree with Kena this is a wonderful peom, walkingblind told me about you I'm glad she did.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great Write. I imagined myself indulging in a special moment lyke this... Great energy.
Emotional&romantic.
This poem made mi day and calmed me .
~Reeses~

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and when I feel your skin its like touching God's mind
with my fingertips........oh wow!!!! i love this piece. i favorited it,it's amazing! you are def one of the stronger writers here on this site. such a romantic poem, each stanza flowing into the next.

YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!

thanks for sharing.

kena



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Marvin Lewis Jr.
Marvin Lewis Jr.

Trenton, NJ



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I'm 19 y.o. and I write lyrics, prose, poetry, and treatments. I'm currently self-publishing my first book entitled "The Language Of My Imagination" which consist of poetry and prose that touch on suc.. more..

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