Student's Life

Student's Life

A Poem by Purva Pathak

Student's life is that a game.
Full of pleasure and that of pain.
It is the time when we should be able to decide
What is good for us and what is to be kept aside.
First day of the session
We try to be disciplined and follow the rule.
But from the next day we think
' It is not so cool ! '
Come to the school clean and neat.
In the exams don't try to cheat.
Wish the teachers whom you meet.
Walk properly! don't drag your feet.
These are the rules we are taught to feed.
History,Geography,Civics are all boring.
During these lessons,class seems to be snoring.
During the abhorrent examination,
We all are in tension.
Praying to God," God! please pass me this time
Now onward I'll always pay attention. "
Our deplorable result horrifies us badly.
Wishing each other luck we leave the school sadly.
When a student,we think it is atrocious
But when we become  man,
We realize that it was the most precious.
It hurts a lot when the school life ends.
We miss our teachers and our friends.
We pray to the Almighty to get back that time
But it is just like searching for cherries in the juice of lime.

© 2013 Purva Pathak


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Mh, a wonderful poem! I know what you feel...
I have to say I will miss all my friends... I can relate to your poem :)
The only thing I disagree a bit is that I don't think I will miss my teachers (they did some real sh*t with us). But you know, everyone has different teachers, I only have my point of view^^

I really like this part:
"Praying to God," God! please pass me this time
Now onward I'll always pay attention.""

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purva Pathak

7 Years Ago

:)
thnx fr da compliment :)



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Beautifully written. It is so true and relatable. I liked the similie at the end But it is just like searching for cherries in the juice of lime. Very well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


"We pray to the Almighty to get back that time
But it is just like searching for cherries in the juice of lime."
The above words are true. We appreciate school after we leave her. I agree with the thoughts in the poem. I like to be in the learning environment. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


My Dear Writing Friend,
I really liked this poem it brought back memories. I guess I could sum it all up by saying, “been there, done that”! Keep writing your muses are worth the time to read, well done.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purva Pathak

6 Years Ago

thnku so much! :)
Mh, a wonderful poem! I know what you feel...
I have to say I will miss all my friends... I can relate to your poem :)
The only thing I disagree a bit is that I don't think I will miss my teachers (they did some real sh*t with us). But you know, everyone has different teachers, I only have my point of view^^

I really like this part:
"Praying to God," God! please pass me this time
Now onward I'll always pay attention.""

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purva Pathak

7 Years Ago

:)
thnx fr da compliment :)
I hated school when I was in school.. but now that i'm not anymore.. I miss it so much.. those were the days this poem is a beautiful trip down memory lane. < 3

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purva Pathak

7 Years Ago

thanx.....i appreciate ur comment :)
really nice..filled with lot of emotions..
i can easily relate to it :)
Keep writing!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purva Pathak

7 Years Ago

Ty... :)
Akshat&hearts;

7 Years Ago

yw :)
But it is more than true...It hurts to leave school

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purva Pathak

7 Years Ago

hmm... ;(
Ha, I deal with that every day. You could not be more right. And teachers wounder why students hate school.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NICE ONE..after all 've helped...good start!! keep going better!
you can improve in areas where adjectives and punctuations are concerned..all the best!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Purva Pathak

7 Years Ago

thank you dea....... :*
Purva Pathak

7 Years Ago

abhi .m new isiliye aisa comment...
understoood?? :p

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Purva Pathak

Haldwani, Uttarakhand, India



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Poems were my first love.... I love to compose poems because I find it relaxing to put all my thoughts on a paper after a busy day in school.... Besides composing poems I love reading books,chatting.. more..

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