"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land"   IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(

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Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land

Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy,
      to see if the rabbit hole was rumor
curiouser and curiouser
     about the unimaginable avenue,

She opens my mind and
fear grips my colors
from the hinterland .....                   tremors
wink    
           and blink   
                              and nod

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
   common sense took a recess,
 spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
     to my surprise, the scaramouch    
                 of a head talked back

my birthing in darkness
          musk and dank scent
knocks        my shroom
head explodes
            collide's scope intense

in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
 alas,  we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

clouds of words
spilling like rough gouged stones in
tumbler's majestic insane
forever now i
 

re-pronounce her name



beginning and



end... ;)

                      

© 2016 Einstein Noodle


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What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!

There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!

Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

yes,,to all that dear emma...i raise my voice with you ... unfortunately i have little hope she will.. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

STILL and always will miss Frieda. She taught me how to giggle, curse, raise a pinky, talk insanitie.. read more



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It's beautiful and I have no need of any deep understanding to appreciate it.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

:) way to be Ufi!!! one of the best reviews received! big smile on me face reading you enjoyed the r.. read more
This took me on a trip! Wow! You have a great voice with your poetry. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

hello CL! thank you for the visit! ... i am always amazed that people still find this poem .. it is .. read more
This makes me want to take shrooms and go on trip with you, lol!

You have an interesting mind and rich imagination. This piece is like an out of rhythym tune, but because it's unpredictable in wild colours and yet gently spoken, it creates a beauty of it's own within the chaos it exists in.

Thank you for your reviews on my musings. 😊

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

you know A ... i was going to suggest that you might enjoy reading this one ... how totally cool you.. read more
A. Musing

3 Months Ago

haha! I'm a bit of escapist, so this is like a trip down the rabbit hole and into Wonderland :D I en.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

thank you :))))))))))))))))))))))))
This is piece takes your mind into a different space. Beautifully written.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

ahahaha yes it does doesn't it?! :)))))))))))))))) nice to meet you sonnie .. thank you for the visi.. read more
sonnie ibadah

3 Months Ago

a pleasure ;)
Hi E. - remembering way back when...yes, I do remember your call sign. Thank you so much for sharing. This reads like an ode to Lewis C and Aldous Huxley, perhaps even A.Ginsberg...meandering imagery adds a whimsical touch to your "curious" poem. "I'll be seeing you!"
MissE*


Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

how delighted you chose this one .. did you know Frieda? ... you truly humble me ... those this poem.. read more
I stumbled onto this piece.. so much on this page to give pause for pondering.. I remember Frieda but was too new to the café and perhaps to wrapped in my own mushroom cloud to notice the intricacies of internet life.. it is sometimes too easy with a screen between to forget that real beating and bleeding hearts are on the other side.. the video was a visual story of it's own.. I will be looking for the lyrics in written form.. sometimes that is the best way for me to "hear" the collaboration is so seamless that I didn't realize until I got to the end that there were two authors.. reminding me that we are truly all bound together by the spirit.. if we could just get our heads out of the mushroom clouds.. and yes.. Lewis Carol.. bound by the spirit.. I am going to go ponder now..

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

i can't tell you, olla, how happy i am you found this poem and reviewed it ... and that it inspired .. read more
olla

3 Months Ago

thank YOU.. it's a wonderful piece.. so timely in it's ageless wisdom.. I am sorry I didn't get a ch.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

yes it is .. she is a corker for sure
Well written, Einstein.
Unlike the mushroom cloud.
Enjoyed this piece.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

not into the cloud eh!? ;))) thank you for reading and commenting Kay ... i will have to stop out yo.. read more
Kay Salisu Titilola

6 Months Ago

My pleasure...
This is one fine piece of fantasy poem. It makes my imagination race around and I like the places your poem takes me to :)
Absolutely lovable piece of work... Keep writing dear friend :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thank you so much nazia .. such an encouraging review ..so gratifying that reading it "took you plac.. read more
this is a very good piece here, i love this part..."As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
common sense took a recess," Wonderfully done

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

Freida was a great friend to many here at the Cafe' and i am tickled that you, along with many, poin.. read more
Kesch

6 Months Ago

i am so sorry to hear that. I left for 2 weeks only after 4 days of joining cause of personal reason.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

yes... i can be for sure ... i have found, however, the more valleys of pain loss and disappointment.. read more
Wowwww…this is fanciful and oh so perfect. The blending of the supernatural and the emotions based in loss and regret. This is some powerful writing, glad you reposted, it was amazing!!!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thanks for the Wowwwww Crowley!! so happy you decided to read this one ... we had fun writing it ..... read more

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