"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land"   IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(

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Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land

Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy,
      to see if the rabbit hole was rumor
curiouser and curiouser
     about the unimaginable avenue,

She opens my mind and
fear grips my colors
from the hinterland .....                   tremors
wink    
           and blink   
                              and nod

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
   common sense took a recess,
 spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
     to my surprise, the scaramouch    
                 of a head talked back

my birthing in darkness
          musk and dank scent
knocks        my shroom
head explodes
            collide's scope intense

in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
 alas,  we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

clouds of words
spilling like rough gouged stones in
tumbler's majestic insane
forever now i
 

re-pronounce her name



beginning and



end... ;)

                      

© 2016 Einstein Noodle


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What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!

There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!

Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes,,to all that dear emma...i raise my voice with you ... unfortunately i have little hope she will.. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

STILL and always will miss Frieda. She taught me how to giggle, curse, raise a pinky, talk insanitie.. read more



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Well written, Einstein.
Unlike the mushroom cloud.
Enjoyed this piece.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

not into the cloud eh!? ;))) thank you for reading and commenting Kay ... i will have to stop out yo.. read more
Kay Salisu Titilola

1 Month Ago

My pleasure...
This is one fine piece of fantasy poem. It makes my imagination race around and I like the places your poem takes me to :)
Absolutely lovable piece of work... Keep writing dear friend :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

thank you so much nazia .. such an encouraging review ..so gratifying that reading it "took you plac.. read more
this is a very good piece here, i love this part..."As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
common sense took a recess," Wonderfully done

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

Freida was a great friend to many here at the Cafe' and i am tickled that you, along with many, poin.. read more
Kesch

2 Months Ago

i am so sorry to hear that. I left for 2 weeks only after 4 days of joining cause of personal reason.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

yes... i can be for sure ... i have found, however, the more valleys of pain loss and disappointment.. read more
Wowwww…this is fanciful and oh so perfect. The blending of the supernatural and the emotions based in loss and regret. This is some powerful writing, glad you reposted, it was amazing!!!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

thanks for the Wowwwww Crowley!! so happy you decided to read this one ... we had fun writing it ..... read more
Wonderful write, kinda reminded me of the sixties ;-]

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

i am so happy you found this to read ... it always reminds me of our Cafe' friend Frieda ... definit.. read more
I can picture what was written here thru ur words good work

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

thank you for reviewing ... seeing the words is all important in a poem like this i think... so i fe.. read more
Are you ever in contact with her? It would be pretty incredible if she ever came back.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

Freida use to answer my e-mails but i haven't heard from her in over a year :( it would be a benefit.. read more
Sounds like a good trip, dude nice flow of imagery, haven't heard the expression "half past daft," in a long time, great poem,

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

ahahahaha ... not an easy thing to debate over a keyboard ;) i am crotchety and fixed here in my lit.. read more
gram linski

7 Months Ago

starter for 10, E, the Old Testament is all fire and brimstone, an eye for an eye, vengeance and pai.. read more
Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

yes...Old and New have quite different directions don't they ... i think in either the rules are giv.. read more
This work is a wonderful blending of fantasy and sci-fi with a pinch of reality thrown into the mix. Very nice. And I'm sorry that your co-writer was harassed off the site, I wish her and you well...

Posted 8 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

nice to see you here LE! and thank you very much for taking time ....and glad you enjoyed our little.. read more

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