Spring Me

Spring Me

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

baby blue softly folded into 
cotton  clouds
bourbon drenched 
sugar cubes torched by
body warmed winds 

would you come with me?

buds of promise firm
supple stems move as
spring waters over
rocks jagged 
translucent film
suspends us

join me

dancing flitting flirting fireflies
cheeky kisses of faeries
thousands of them raspberry buzzings
flushed with hungry root
everything we need, 
everything we want is
down below.

we break the rocks, 
bind the spells, 
take the gems

growing together you and i
entwining vines 

reaching.

3/23/2018
E.

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© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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Einstein Noodle

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Love it, love it, love it E.! “Spring Me” too- right now! Delightfully spring-y, lyrical, vital, sensuous and alogether ‘ ‘happy-fying’ poem...eloquent language and colorfully fresh imagery jumps off the page and double- entendres tickle the senses. “Entwining vines..reaching”- ahhhh yes... Splendid write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

oh my dear Annette! i am so happy for your review..it is what i had shot for ..so glad you picked up.. read more



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A poem on passion, so indirect, yet so direct. Hidden passion in magical words, galores of it. Spell bound, I read the unfolding of the ultimate connection. Blissful, soft, tender yet very sensual. Love should be like this. Unhurried, as a cool and calm spring, tempering jagged rocks, breaking them, flooding gently the soul. Kudos E!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

so so happy you found and enjoyed this one...it is one of my personal favorites (if we are allowed .. read more
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

9 Months Ago

Ohhh...no Maa'm...just your friend E.
It was such a pleasure reading this poem, all the way .. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

;) .................
An ethereal feeling of light and joy emits from this lovely piece of poetry..one feels the abundance of love within each poetic verse so well written and expressed..
Nice Work ..

Posted 9 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

thanks Fran with the sun upon her face ;) you make me smile ear to ear
E.
there is no denying that love is really something potent and powerful emotion.. smooth flow of words.. i like the expressive words..directly connecting to the heart including the throbbing and beating of it my friend

Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

thanks sette! i appreciate your review ... coming back to this one i experience the joy i felt in wr.. read more
Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

ps. thank you for pointing out specifically things you like ..that helps a lot as i want to improve .. read more
sette

10 Months Ago

you are welcome my dear friend
Life living, life giving words. Aloha!
A color and effortless vibrancy to your words my friend - love this energy. Magic writing x

Posted 11 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

ahahahah and i am so happy you read this one...i think it fits your spirit well ... Aloha to you! i .. read more
A bourbon drenched cotton cloud, now all we need is a bit of rain and a barrel:) this is a smooth and jazzy poem I can see life renewed.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

12 Months Ago

ahahaha yes ..rain and a barrel please!! your review makes me smile for sure Cherrie! thanks so much.. read more
The imagery in this poem is delightful and the theme of the poem is so well done... I feel like reading this again and again... The writing is so eloquent and the overall tone of the poem is very refreshing

Posted 12 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

12 Months Ago

oh you made my day Mist! to know people want to read again is very gratifying ... thanks so much for.. read more
DarkMist

12 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
Spring me - makes me think of escaping, together, growing, learning. Un uplifting and romantic poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

it gives me a smile to know this affected you in that way ..its what i was shooting for and you revi.. read more
Euphoric feelings felt by two souls. Entwined as one. Captured in a sheer delightful poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

glad you found this one to review Dee ... it is one of my personal favorites if we allowed such thin.. read more
Love this poem, E. You've sprung a great pun at us... ;)
I like how you first describe the physical changes that the season brings all around us- from perfectly shaped cotton-candy clouds, to the warmer winds, then to the supple new buds and stems; and then move onto the changes in our moods that we associate with spring generally. This is an absolutely gorgeous piece, E.
The entire first stanza flows off my tongue, as smoothly as fresh triple-berry slushies on warm springy days.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

oh Moon's Fairest ..i am so happy this affected you so..and that you happened to choose it to read ... read more
Some strong imagery and an uplifting write. Your last three lines, particularly so. We all need a bit of spring in us. Thank you

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank you so much Chris .. i am happy you were able to join me in my little romp ;)) yes... we do al.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Year Ago

Happy to have found your poem

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