My God, My Magician

The poem highlights the value of god's mercy and his everyday works for his children.

Everyday he shows me different tricks,
Always he acts as a Sorcerer.
From the cluster of my pains he picks,
And he acts as my deliverer.

Cardician of my life you are, 

Your words acts as a thumper.
In your hands are my fortune cards bizarre,
And I believe the success will be bumper.

Your blessings are enchantments for me.
Paranormal are your works in my life.
I am singing your praise now and always be,
Your mercies and boons are rife.

O My God! My Magician! Keep doing your magic.
You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

“Your blessings are enchantments for me.
Paranormal are your works in my life.
I am singing your praise now and always be,
Your mercies and boons are rife.

O My God! My Magician! Keep doing your magic.
You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic."

It is a very good part of this work which is really filled with optimism. I liked your faith over the God. It is the very humbleness in you which makes you to compose this work. Thank you for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

i PARTICULARLY loved the last line
thanks for this wonderful poem and entry into my comp

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[Pooja]

God's works are always beneficial for us.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Kleptomaniac]

An honourable psalm for God. Simile between him and a magician is appropriate.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Crazy Robot]

God...magician...er..amazing..er..

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Lara Crimson]

“Everyday he shows me different tricks,
Always he acts as a Sorcerer.
From the cluster of my pains he picks,
And he acts as my deliverer."

God is omnipotent, omnipresent and omniscient. I believe in him and he keeps his eyes upon us.
Now, about your work, the terms you used in your poem such as sorcerer, cardician, tricks are all related to magic ; which is unique to see. The very account of God you draw is wonderful and I like it. I can see the gratitude of yours towards God very clearly. Looking for more of your works.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the core of my heart! Yes, God is great.

[Breadwinner]

A good praise for God..Lovely poem

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Silmara McGarry]

Wonderful, uplifting!!! God´s magic works even when we don't understand, for he knows what is best for us all, long before we even know... I love the words and the poem!!

Well done!!!
:-)

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Anjali]

A good poem, indeed! I liked it. The words you've used are very thoughtful! Keep writing!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Anjali]

You are very welcome!

[Im His Daughter]

Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you. 😊