A Mathematical Rhapsody

This poem shows the sentiments of a mathematician towards his lover in mathematical form.

I doubt; Can I live long rather?

As we both are parallel lines, which do not meet each other.

To understand you is a task very hard;

Before that, the problems of Mensuration I will regard.

Expressions of your face frequently deviates,

That the comprehension of sine and cosine alleviates.

Our only meeting of love made me disappoint.

It was like a tangent that meets a circle only at one point.

I promised you there that all your expenses I will afford.

As I am the diameter of my family circle, which is the longest chord.

My love towards you will truly suit.

It is a quadratic equation of real root.

In your friend circle, I was too your friend.

But I was like an Arithmetic Progression's term of the end.

Your deception make me full of sorrow,

My life becomes as a cylinder hollow.

In your love, I myself dangle.

I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.

It seems to me that I am an endless construction. 

Author's Note

It is a little weird and humorous.

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

“In your love, I myself dangle.
I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction."

I should really applaud this work of you for both of its parameters- unique and humorous. I am really startled how one can knit a poem, a poem of love, through the central theme- Mathematics. It is really an amazing work. Somewhere I find rhymes a little odd, but it's effect outshone by this amazing love comedy. Thank you for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the core of my heart!

[Stan Lee]

This is SO CLEVER!! Very, very impressed with this rhyme. You've managed to use so many mathematical facts and words and yet interweave a love story! This is great Raj. Entertaining and educational. Super writing. Thanks for sharing! :)

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much. 😊

[ashish hajagulkar]

you have kept words so interesting that every line of that poem is giving sense of feeling love very emotional and I like one part of that is
""My love towards you will truly suit.
It is a quadratic equation of real root.""

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much. 😊

[C_theSurrealist]

It is amazingly written in mathematically matter. The sense is there and the essence of the true meaning of your poem mixes with the geometry and trigonometry. Keep writing! :D

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you a lot. 😊

[The Iron Horseman]

Nicely done. A clever construction, well thought out. I hope the subject of the poem has a good math education though, or she won't understand a word! :)

[Raj Sahu]

Truly said! Thank you very much. 😊

[TheUnrulyWriter]

I think my favorite thing about this poem is that it takes both intelligence and whimsy from the writer to create such a piece. I often find one or the other, but rarely do I find both at once!!! Well done!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot. 😊

[Duncan Brown]

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[EcstaticEuphoria]

This was fabulous! Love the combination of the creative and the logic, very well done!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much. 😊

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the core of my heart!

[wordman]

you may have solved a mystery,love

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much. 😊

[Sanskrity Mishra]

It's really humorous...Your way of expressing is really creative..keep it up

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you. 😊😊

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Ur welcome

[Jackie]

A locely writing excercise. I see some tricky words in there. Makes it sound a bit sophisticated. A most lovely read. Please take time to look at mine as well.. Thanks

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks dear. 😊
I will surely see yours too.

[George Coombs]

Excellent experimental writing, a pleasure to read, great work

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you. 😊