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A Poem by revalatia

you knew you always had me
...i guess i should have really known
the way you'd leave me just to go play
when you knew i felt alone
sometimes you really want me as i start to back away
left to sit inside your closet
for another rainy day

© 2016 revalatia


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Sounds like you are in a tango, with him moving back as you move forward, and you moving back as he takes his step. If he knew you were feeling like this, then yes, It was his mistake made. I hope he sees the error of his ways before another rainy day.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Pain deep inside your words. Each moment of your poem is strong emotion.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sounds like you are in a tango, with him moving back as you move forward, and you moving back as he takes his step. If he knew you were feeling like this, then yes, It was his mistake made. I hope he sees the error of his ways before another rainy day.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 24, 2016
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revalatia
revalatia

Azusa, CA



About
Thoughts in motion..words spiraling inside me.. more to come.................................later....In the meantime.. My own moment of clarity.. was realizing repeating the same mistakes over and ov.. more..

Writing
Beeware.. Beeware..

A Poem by revalatia



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