Spring Me

baby blue softly folded into 

cotton  clouds

bourbon drenched 

sugar cubes torched by

body warmed winds 

would you come with me?

buds of promise firm

supple stems move as

spring waters over

rocks jagged 

translucent film

suspends us

join me

dancing flitting flirting fireflies

cheeky kisses of faeries

thousands of them raspberry buzzings

flushed with hungry root

everything we need, 

everything we want is

down below.

we break the rocks, 

bind the spells, 

take the gems

growing together you and i

entwining vines 

reaching.

3/23/2018

E.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Love it, love it, love it E.! “Spring Me” too- right now! Delightfully spring-y, lyrical, vital, sensuous and alogether ‘ ‘happy-fying’ poem...eloquent language and colorfully fresh imagery jumps off the page and double- entendres tickle the senses. “Entwining vines..reaching”- ahhhh yes... Splendid write.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my dear Annette! i am so happy for your review..it is what i had shot for ..so glad you picked up on the sensuality ... i am shy and was not certain it would come through .. i am happy as a lark my friend .. thanks to your visit and taking time to comment ... :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
E.

[Chris Shaw]

Some strong imagery and an uplifting write. Your last three lines, particularly so. We all need a bit of spring in us. Thank you

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you so much Chris .. i am happy you were able to join me in my little romp ;)) yes... we do all need it

[Chris Shaw]

Happy to have found your poem

[Madeira]

Fantastic, such beautiful words and images, this drenched me with the hope and promise of the author

[Einstein Noodle]

hi Madeira! what a treat to have your visits and reviews...you are so encouraging ... glad that you felt the exuberance intended ;) and again... thank you for taking time here!
E.

[Ken Simm.]

A gossamer poem. Lilting and lovely and jam packed with unique and simply beautiful phrases like bourbon drenched clouds.
In a word uplifting. And after our winter here is just the tonic I need.

[Einstein Noodle]

yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! come and leap with me Ken ... our old stuck bones and joints be damned right!!!??? yahoooooooooooooo! ;)
good to see you here always my friend! thank you for reviewing ... big peace joy and health to ya!
E.

[Sami Khalil]

Weaver of excellent wording and imagery entwined. So exciting to read and enjoy this type of poetry. So glad to have you among us...

[Einstein Noodle]

awwwwww your making me blush Sami :)) thanks so much ... i am so encouraged to know when someone truly enjoys a poem i have written .. and lets me know it ... as well as when they don't .. we have such a fine community here at the Cafe that offers both .. i couldn't be more honored than to be accepted here ... and to have developed such good friendships like yours ... big thanks sir!
E.

[Sami Khalil]

Honor is ours and mine. It takes a talent like yours to raise the standards. If I don't like something or have questions, I will email privately. You are welcome, sir ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reaching for the most we can achieve is a good thing, reaching with someone else at our side, that is the best thing.

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it is jacob ... i totally agree ... tho difficult to find mutual commitment, it is well worth the aggravations and deepening that go with it ... thank you for taking time my friend!
E.

[KWP]

oh you have a way with words and yes indeed I will come with you if only to witness all you have beholden in your poetry above ... this is so wonderful it leaps with life and I feel it, see it, taste it all - oh you really are on show here just like the jonquils and ranunculus and daffodils :D X

[Einstein Noodle]

getting out me flower book ....;) what a joy to read your review dear one...to have you feel all that in reading is precious to us for sure ..so glad you stopped to take a little time to review too ..you know you are a gem right?! :)))))))))))
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the complete poem my friend.
"we break the rocks,
bind the spells,
take the gems"
The above lines. So good. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Einstein Noodle]

i am so glad you point out those particular lines coyote Man ...i wondered how the relative hardness of them compared with the rest of the poem worked or not ... coming from a deep romantic such as yourself ... i feel more confident about them ..always thankful for your voice and visits .. peace and joy my friend!
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the complete poem. A meaningful poem and you are welcome my friend.
Coyote

[NEHA]

you kept me feeling your poem right from the first line...
good writing...
loved it
#claps

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you so much for your kind and generous review NEHA ... i feel truly humbled and very much encouraged ... many thanks ... have to stop by your pages ... peace and joy!
E.

[NEHA]

a warm welcome!
#cheers

[Govind singh]

Wow Einstein sir...Ur work never fails to amaze me....loved it.. especially growing together u and I entwining vines...lovely written.. thank you for sharing Ur wonderful thoughts sir:)

[Einstein Noodle]

and thank you Govind, for your encouraging support .. so happy you enjoyed reading! :)
E.

[April Blue]

I really loved this, this feast of words came together almost like a fantasy....

[Einstein Noodle]

:))))) yes..a touch of fantasy indeed ;)))))))))))) so happy you enjoyed the read .. thankful for your review April ... love and peace
E.